All Comments on 'The Writer and the Medical Student'

The ending? This story ends as a "what's going to happen?" That's the rest of the story ... but its not there. Kind of leaves you saying to yourself, "HUH ? "

Same comment, either publish it full, or mention parts in my opinion. Apart from this. Well written and interesting plot.

Same as the other 2 comments. Not a story.

Ditto on the previous. Hopefully part 2 is forthcoming.

Still, good enough for 5*.

Tc

Good beginning!

4

Highly enjoyable story! This wasn’t going to be a one night stand. This is a marathon! Keep writing, please!

Someone knows his way around the old campus. It's an interesting choice whether to set in an accurate setting or whether to be a tad generic. I found myself checking for accuracy. Apart from your Blackwells being better stocked than I've ever seen it nothing screamed at me. I worry about your pace a bit which is little phrenetic with nothing happening. And after that cataract of story telling, if you don't get on and finish it we will all be wondering why we bothered.

Not sure what the point of this story is. If she’s going to continue dating others, why does he bother? Needs another chapter.

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