All Comments on 'The Written Truth Ch. 04'

good work.

Loving the Stacy sections, not so interested in the brother - my preference would be his story being spun off after chapter one, to give him his own series, while we concentrated on hers. The current set-up gives a male dom story alongside a not overly connected female sub story - and for me the one takes me out of the other.

4 stars for this reason, but I've still favourited the lot.

O melhor autor, parabéns

update please

Love the Stacy parts. I really feel you have written her into a corner. Would love to see her break free of this stale Fraternity place. Be interesting to see her taken & placed in porn industry or as a Vegas Gal. The Marker idea really makes me wet so much. That power written out is reap\lly something. Please update this tale.

Will you ever continue? Hope so 😉