All Comments on 'The Wrong House Ch. 01'

Good start, so much potential.

A few minor grammatical blips, but the story line and development carried me through with increased anticipation.

Rated a four, mostly because I am sure subsequent submissions will be more powerful reading.

Can't wait to read more...

Great story. Keep up the good work.

Thanks for the feedback and supportive comments. More parts are on the way, I assure you it will ramp up quickly x

Good story will there be more?

Good Story as I would LOVE to have some hapless future slaves breakin and then I could train them to be my sex slaves especially the Charlie one as I would make him pay dearly as he became my new Dani boi on hormones and then a few operations later a full fledged sissy shemale slave all set and ready for his new life in the middle east as a whore. The gimp would get rewarded by breaking the ass pussy of the robbers knowing if she didn't give it too them as hard as she could then it would be her on the receiving end. The only thing would be making sure no others knew of their plan or would miss them. So many naughty ideas cum to mind.