All Comments on 'The Wrong Tent'

A delightful mix of lovely and absolutely slutty. Bravo.

great story, very hot. Thanks for writing and sharing :)

Excellent story; well told. Five stars times five.

Whackedandflat,

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

Inthelatin,

You are quite welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Anon,

Twenty-five stars - I'm honored. Thank you.

good story

Excellent story, can't wait to read your other work!

Chris73170,

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

geek_writer,

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I hope you enjoy my other stories too.

Very, very well done.

TaleWeaver4u,

Thank you very much.

That is a great story, and a well-written one too! Thanks!

Antegria,

That's very kind of you. Thank you!

This was superb.

Anon,

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

If I have an idea for a series for you to write, would you be interested?

Anon,

I'd be happy to hear your idea. I can't promise that I'd definitely write it - my inspiration is a fickle beast - but I might if it's up my alley.

You can send it in a comment or through the author feedback option if you want.

Anon,

I've taken a look at the idea you sent over. I do think it'd make an interesting series, and there are a lot of possibilities in it. I don't think it's something that I'm going to take on right at the moment, although I do wish you luck in finding an author for it. If I change my mind and try writing it I'll leave a comment here before I publish.

Thanks for reading, and be well.

Thanks for letting me know. Please keep writing. I enjoy your stories quite a bit.

Anon,

Sure thing. I certainly plan to keep writing, and I'm glad you're enjoying my stories.

I love reading your stories. Please keep writing ✍️.

Rsh1962,

I'm glad you enjoy them. I do plan to continue writing.

Sweet and hot, easily five stars!

FictionRomantic,

Thanks! Stars are delicious.

Go back to the story and where you wrote "Oh, Jackie," he murmured as he sank home. He should have said "Jackie said you wanted me" as he sank home...... Then continue the story with her and Lewis enjoying each other..

Anon,

That's an interesting idea. I haven't experimented with alternate versions of stories, but I'll think about it.

I love the way you drew out the story with the internal conflict within your main character.

You should consider giving your MC a name. Or did I miss it?

HornyXhosa,

Thanks! It does make the story a tad bittersweet, but I do like the way the layers work.

I don't think the main character was named in the text of the story - chalk it up to the focus on her perspective, perhaps. I don't know what I'd name her, off the top of my head. I'd have to think about it.

Wonderful story. For what it's worth, I actually like the idea of the main character not being named. Combined with the perspective, the story flowed well enough without it that its absence was more immersive than distracting.

stevens1982,

Thank you. Yeah, I don't feel like the absence of her name is a problem with the story, but I also understand some folks being curious.

I still don't know what her name is, though. If HornyXhosa thinks of a name before I do, their pick is official.

I am really enjoying the ways you build plausibility for these scenarios in your stories. The drunken neighbor who misses Nathan's cock inside her, the bad friend and successful slut that tricks the dad-to-be when he's in the middle of his reproductive project. The endings read as a bit sad to me (and to others, based on comments), but they make me wonder: are they simply a way to bring the story together, or are they part of the kink for you?

Unholyintentions,

I'm glad you're enjoying my stories. You're correct about the endings - they're both a means to tie up the storylines and also a way to confirm that the woman in the story is indeed pregnant, which is part of the kink for me. The endings for some of the stories are a bit melancholy, especially if they hew closer to realism, but that's not part of the kink so much as part of the flavor of those stories.

Thanks for answering my question. I was scratching my head and thinking this would be the first time I see the sad-guilty fap figuring into the breeding kink, haha.

Unholyintentions,

Hey, sure thing! Yeah, my characters do plenty of stuff that they should feel guilty for, and some of them do, but that's independent of my kinks.

So hot

Anon,

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

No matter how drunk I have ever been once I had my cock inside the woman under me I knew who it was just by the way it felt. Lewis knew right away that it wasn't Jackie but since she wasn't trying to stop him he figured why not have some fun. He also figured it out that since she broke up with her last lover Chris a while ago and that she probably wasn't on the pill. He was polite enough to mention a condom to give her a chance to come clean but when she said nothing he figured he could enjoy possibly impregnating her and not have to worry about the consequences.

Anon,

That is one interpretation of the story. I deliberately wrote the story to be a bit ambiguous about what Jackie and Lewis each knew, since the narrator only knows what they said and did.

I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

A lovely story! I was hoping that Lewis and Jackie would reveal that the previous night had been set up all along and that the protagonist was welcome to come back to civilization with them for a continuation of the debauchery. Alas. Still, a lovely bit of breeding is never something to turn one's nose up at. Thank you so much for sharing your wonderfully dirty thoughts with us!

Anon,

You are quite welcome! I'm glad that my dirty thoughts entertain folks.

I did feel like there were a lot of possible directions this story could have gone, and this isn't the happiest possible ending for everyone, but I think our main character is happy enough.

Thank you for a great and well written story

Capricon713,

You are quite welcome. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I absolutely loved this. I think sweet and gentle breeding is my main preference, even if the “breedee“ was the wrong one in this case.

Anischa,

I'm glad you enjoyed it! I also enjoy sweet and gentle, even if it's not the only thing I enjoy.

I absolutely love how it’s left ambiguous whether or not Lewis and/or Jackie knew and/or realized what happened. I really could see it going either way.

trappedinthecl0set,

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed that element. I do feel like, especially with stories told by one character, it makes sense for us to share the limits of their perception. Beyond that, sometimes the superposition of two possibilities is more exciting than either one by itself.