All Comments on 'The Xmas Party'

Every married woman need this, a BBC. Every white woman need try one and have one black lover with a big one.

FOUR major errors in the first 2 paragraphs alone! Did not bother to read the remainder. There is simply NO excuse for this crap!!! Numerous members will gladly assist you with proof reading to turn this rag into a hot story.

ever other anon needs is delusional.

The real drama only begins in the delivery room.

about the consequences. Surely an adult woman would think about this. The writer ignored this obvious situation.

Another trashy white whore

English clearly isn't your first language. Your writing needs proofreading before submitting.

The story is well received by Lit. users: 23,153 views & 25 favorites.

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I loved it,it was a good story,u people who didn't like it must not liked it or don't like blacks. U must be jelous because u don't have a big cock,u must have a 5" cock u wimp,I'm surprised that u made that comment,u must not like black people.u most likely cheat on ur cheat on ur girlfriend or wife or u wouldn't of made that comment. Gillty as charged, dumb ass.but u have ur wright to ur opinion, and I have mine. If u didn't like the story u wouldn't have read it.

Good story. In the heat of the action, I've had a couple of guys cum in me, just as I was about to cum too.