All Comments on 'The Yards Pt. 02'

“There is something that we will need to do to protect your safety.” She paused again looking at us. We will need to get both of you graded, and you will need to sign power of attorney over to me. "

Hmmm?? Silly girls, that promise ranks right up there with "I won't cum in your mouth while you blow me. Trust me."

Loving this story and where it could go!

Good slave story. Story does tend to wonder off in different directions for Individual persons. But on the other hand doesn't go back to other things that were pointed out to our Attention for a minute. As for some of the Characters that saw them as they Were fleaing after being released. Please keep writing on this story..

Good start. Lots of potential.

I like this second part of the story. Definitely not what I was expecting. :-)

You have a good imagination for the scenes but also tend to distract us with irrelevant details.

I hope the next part is already on the way!