by Jugg_Head
Your story writing is so good. You keep up the tension. I look forward to the next installments hopefully with getting togethers of the 2 main characters and a lot of intense sex scenes in all positions..........Cannot wait to see the next chapters........
Do I gotta beg? Is that what you want? You want me to beg? ALL you had to do was say so, now I'm out here checking daily for a literotica update. The cruelty of it all.
boringly artificial.
People like Janice are not as focused on a bad relationship purely for future security, and guys like Matt would not put up w/ the skinny bitch's attitude & behavior.
You've created 2 characters of one type & are forcing them into your plot line.
It just ain't working for as long as you've been forcing it.