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Click hereMatt's breathing became deeper as Janice continued to stroke his long penis. He felt her descend slightly as one her hands released it's hold, coming around between his legs to massage the base of his shaft and balls.
"Holy fuck!" Matt gasped. "Baby... fuck!... that's good."
"Mmm! You like that, sexy man?" Janice cooed, adding a twisting motion to the wrist of the hand devoted entirely to Matt's shaft.
"Ye-Yes..." Matt whispered. "Oh my god! Keep doing it just like that, baby!"
It wasn't long before Janice felt Matt's balls tighten in her one hand and his shaft expand in the other.
"Oh ssshhit!" Matt hissed as cum came guzzling out of his cock head, washed away instantly down the drain from the shower flow overhead.
"There! All better!" Janice cheerfully exclaimed, giving his softening dick a final squeeze before letting go.
"I'll say!" Matt breathed, turning around to face Janice's smiling countenance. The two embraced tightly under the warm falling water. They made out for several minutes before the two finished cleaning their bodies and exited the glass shower stall.
"I'm just gonna brush my teeth. Meet you in bed!" said Janice.
Matt was laying in bed with is back propped against the headboard when Janice entered his bedroom. She was still completely nude, her breasts wobbling freely as she climbed into Matt's bed beside him.
Their arms instinctively reached out to each other to hold their bodies close. Matt kissed Janice's lips when their faces met. The two nestled into bed and a restful, easy peace descended in the quiet room.
"Who would have thought two months ago..." Janice said in the dark. "...that we'd be naked in bed together right now?"
"Not I!" exclaimed Matt. "I usually miss out on luck like that."
"Hmm! And they say black cats only bring bad luck!" Janice giggled.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 1 year agoGreat storytelling. Liking the characters, the slow building up and don't mind the many typo's. Five stars every time, easy.
Like many writers, you do tend to become less credible when describing the mechanics of sizes and proportions.
M cups are big on a small lady, but not big enough to approach the floor when she's on all fours, by far. They are even bigger on a big lady, say over 300lbs, but even then, to reach the ground, the lady in question would have to be huge.
See, the letter indicates the difference between under- and overboob circumference, making M (13", -2" for some stupid reason =) 11" of difference between under and over. It's not a fixed size, it is a proportion, different for every band size.
Likewise, if the breasts are as large as pictured, they hang a little, even when perky. So if the lovers embrace, they will NEVER press into his chest, unless the woman is a foot taller the the guy. They hang in front of her, their widest part a little below her chest if they ride really high, meaning a lot below his chest if she rests her head against his shoulder, making him close to a foot taller.
If his tool is so huge, and stiff pointing upwards, how can it ever graze her folds when they're in the shower? For that to happen, her folds would have to be at the level of his navel at least, making her almost two feet taller than him.
I know it's a fantasy story and i'm not trying to spoil it. On the contrary, it's so good that i hate to see things like that remind me it is all made up. You are too good for that, it spoils an otherwise great story to some extent.
So if he is in fact at least half a foot taller than she is, which is suggested, when they're standing in the shower his balls would be about the level of the upper slope of her butt. She's with her back to him, and his erect tip would graze her shoulder blades. If his dick is really that big, it would, even if she's as tall as he is.
I love the stories and give em 5* every time, but i am just a little disappointed that these things give the credibility away.
Just walk into the shower, chalk up the heights of your own body and those of someone 6-12" smaller. It's really not that hard. And forget about cup sizes, those ARE in fact quite complicated, and often meaningless unless you have more data on the woman in question. "Bigger than his head" is way more descriptive than JJ (which equals K btw).
Thanks and happy writing!
Yknow2064over 3 years agoLoving every installment. Keep em coming!
adtroupeover 3 years agoAt this point, I know it's gonna be five stars everytime. I'm just waiting for the uploads! Jugg_Head don't miss!
