by Nikkiejanes
Very nicely done and enjoyable story. Will read more of your work as well. Many thanks for writing and sharing.
I really liked this story. It was clearly descriptive, sexy, and was a quick read, which I enjoyed. I think you could make this a series, perhaps bring back Mel and add more tension between the husband and wife. Well done.
I only have time to sip your story and that is enough. I appreciate that this explores the themes of sharing and the younger woman. Given how many men fall into young, pretty vaginas, this story is quite current, and it is hot!
Well done,
Wes
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