All Comments on 'Theatre Rehearsal Takes a Turn'

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Davester37Davester37almost 2 years ago

Wow! Hot stuff! Well written, and much appreciated. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Interesting, unusual, intense. Write more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This is a good, well written story. I like the idea of the characters coming together by rehearsing a scene from a play. Unfortunately, this is not a romance. Instead, it’s an erotic coupling. The characters don’t know enough about each other to have an attraction, other than a physical attraction. A sequel that developed their romance after this initial encounter could be a good story, examining the couple’s feelings, and why they are attracted to each other.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Since this took place in one of the rehearsal spaces of the theatre, I was expecting one or more stage hands to walk in on them mid-coitus!

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