All Comments on 'Then and Now Pt. 01'

Erotic and very well written. 5*

Well written, well paced erotic romance. What more could you wish for? I look forward to reading more.

Excellent 5*

Very good, well written and I enjoyed her pov. Thank you!

I really liked this! You did a great job...pain becomes pleasure...something we women can all relate to. Well done.

Talented writer! 5

Beautifully done.

As all the best in Literotica, too good to be true. This is why writers like you are needed. Their dreams make our every-day life much more bearable. Thank you!

Excellent, now I need to read your back catalogue!

Nicely done. Very erotic, mixed nicely with touching romanticism - a classic.

Wow — very nicely done. You really paint a complete, sensual picture with the exact details required. Very impressive. I will be reading all your works.

Well done. It's good to see you back in the groove Mayday.

Well, fuck. That was art. Wish I could write that well.

Excellent story. Well written as always.

what a wonderful story. This could be one of the best story that I have read. It was truly a love story I could relate to. Brings back memories from long ago. Thank you

Amazing. So well written and so hot.

Honestly one of the best stories I've read on this site and there are some really good ones. Your ability to get into the head of people that are incredibly aroused and loving is really special. I'm sure it took you a lot of time to get the words just right. It's truly appreciated. Please keep developing your craft.

Beautiful! Peter is a very lucky guy. Thank you.