by westjayne495
Good writing, personality interaction, and fine fucking. I expected Sara would be walking in on two or three of them. Having the mom made Jack want the daughter more.
Football loving
Sweet tale, clever descriptions, arousal at every turn.
'as it was impossible for me to concentrate on the call with a naked and erect young man in front of me. It got worse.'
I could imagine how this might be a difficulty....
I didn't see that coming! (The ending I mean!)
I think this was the most explicit sexual writing I have read of yours so far - and a bit hard for me to fantasise about being Jack or Clay - but it was thoroughly enjoyable.
But boy I sure as hell can fantasise about you and your amazing sexual desires.
Pure sex!
Fantastic.....ha ha
XXX
A great very descriptive sexy read, love the twist at the end. Brilliant as always Jayne.
This story shows that the line between porn and erotica isn't how explicit the sex is but how completely it immerses the reader in the entire physical, psychological and emotional experience. And that ending!