All Comments on 'There Is No Plan B Ch. 03'

It's a good story but man, you got to speed up the delivery. A long delayed Thank You. Ronnie W.

...excellent stuff, let's have the next chapter soon!

i like this story, but it seems like it's starting to go the direction of one of those lame-ass family free-for-all stories and that sucks, because so far it's been awesome. it should remain a strictly mother-son story, IMO

I don't care how long you take just keep them as good as this and it is well worth the wait. There are so many different avenues for you to explore with this storyline,

so just keep it up.

Thanks,

Joel

most erotic --- taboo is what makes most erotic --- stories go precipitously down hill, when the authors have most or all members fucking, in addition to John, Mark, Pete, Tom from both away and the neighbor also joining in.

the most erotic are consistently the ones stayin within mostly two people (either adult daughter and father or adult daughter and mother), making their act special, unique, exclusive,,,, creating a world of their own, lifting them and them alone to depths and heights they feel only them and them alone could reach,,,

but when mother fucks son, then daughter, then husband, then Tom from the neighborhood, then some stranger who smiled at her and paid her some lame compliments, then son's college roommates, etc., ad nauseam ---- the story becomes like watching one of these cheap, unscripted group sex DVD's, where you hear nothing but fake grunts, screams, and gallons of fake semen making the Nile River seem like your average creek,,,

this story, I must say, up to this point, is one of the most erotic; all things, alas, must come to an end and most stories come to non-erotic, silly, endings

dont make us wait too long ok???

Complex. I just love surprises. So...Cindy is Jake's "love" child? I see some sweet revenge in the very near future...

Nice twists in the plot. So far excellent. Can't wait for mom's plans to come to fruition.

This story is hot. I love it. Could have done without details of Amsterdam, just a short description to help the story line of Jake and Cindy. Would like to see Jason do his mother in her bed with Jake passed out. Looks like Cindy will be the threesome. She wants Jason, maybe to spite Jake. But to take Jake's wife too. That would be a triumph for her. Leave Tom out of the story. Would like to see more with the priest confession, don't know what, just something to make it even more illicit, more wrong. Anyway you're doing great.

I have just found your stories and read your profile,I am glad i did,very erotic stories ,i suppose this is for your trash bin,your stories are not for mine.

Your stories are indeed just that,I agree with your comments in your profile,write when you are ready,i also agree with what you say about the content of your stories,hope to read more in due course.There will always be critics no matter you have a new fan ME.

please continue this great story

If I adjust my font to read this story, I can barely read any others. If I excuse the awful use of grammer, than I guess anything is exceptable. But I am unwilling to make those adjustments when so many other stories use the correct font and grammer.

To hell with the old english teacher biddies, I thought this was well written told a excellent story. I have just one question though. Why have you done the next chapter' yet? I think mom should have her tubes reattached to give son his baby and if I get my way it want be two long before son also knocks up dad's playmate, that make it perfect son not only helps mom make his dad a cuckold now he takes his dad's lover now that a perfect ending

You keep up, this just keep getting better and better

Great story, like how you were going, but not fair to stop without finishing it.

You great to leave your your readers on the edge of their seat and wanting more.... but stories like these need to be finished good or bad. If you're still writing you should try to do a final chapter to wrap it up.

Thanks

The comment by spbowl sum up my feelings exactly. The author's inability to finish this story or to pass it on to another writer is unfair to Literotica readers. In part, I blame Literotica for not obtaining an undertaking from writers that they will complete any submissions which end with 'TO BE COMPLETED.....' within a reasonable time. One year would be reasonable, but FIVE years??? Get real!

This was quite good fun - so it's a shame you seem to have abandoned it just as it was getting interesting.

I would have liked to heard about mom with son and friend. oh well.

i would love to see more of no plan b and also getting even with the secretary bitch and his father and taking him to the cleaners . i think the bitch needs the sons friends to give her a good and hard and rough gang bang and make her boss watch the whole thing and not be able to help her or himself.

You've sucked me into the saga of the Ritts. When will you do part 4? I am waiting impatiently for it!

...that this story isn't going to be finished, which is a shame, as it was really good. Aah well, never mind.

As this author hasn't published anything going ten years, I wouldn't be holding my breath for a chapter 4. Too bad. I loved the series!!

Another chapter in the works?

There Is No Plan B Ch. 03" - Forty-two Year Old Married Mother Cecilia Ritt and Nineteen Year Old Novice College Student,, Jason Ritt.

The thorough details of the marital-challenged Father/Husband, Jake Ritt, in Amsterdam is attention-deflecting of periphery much-ado-about-nothing to the main theme of the Taboo incestuous affairs of a Mother and Her Son.

The writer/author, 'writerotica' has not written any story in the past fourteen (14) years; it's been over fifteen (15) years since this Chapter 03 ended with the writer's promise of "TO BE CONTINUED" (capitalized in the original comment)! Don't get me wrong, I'm not being overly critical about Chapter 04 not being posted...Yet! However, it's been over fifteen (15) years that we readers have stood by awaiting a writer/author's promise(?), but.....?

However, as there's been a long "silence" since the writer's last story, I'll offer Prayers that all is well in his long absence!

Jason needs to claim Cindy as his and made her pregnant the ultimate revenge on his father