All Comments on 'There will be come'

It was a bit confusing but the concept was great!

Very well done, I feel so bad for them though...shiny!

Well done!

Just got around to reading this submission (don't know how I missed it) and gotta say it was trademark excellent in the genre. The take off of SAW was certainly not easy to pull off but you did it expertly (man you must have a kinky imagination). Just a great read and I, for one, would love to see a sequel with these six characters.

hey u have 2 do the next bit asap wanna read it great story a.x.

I cannot believe the imagination you have! It was totally awesome.Keep up the great work

any more of this story coming? very entertaining so far

Mate....What can I say...It was a FANTASTIC STORY!!! It was SAW but extremly sexy literotica...You are a fantastic author with an immense and intelligent imagination...Pleeeaaseee write more like this....woooowwww.....your very talented...GOOD JOB!!!

Going through your library of decadent delectables, I'd already hoped such a story could be found among them all. You've once again proved not to disappoint. Loved this one!

Was this machine translated from another language? It's just awful and incoherent. You should learn at least grade school level punctuation and usage.