by AlectaShadow
Very interesting writing style and approach to the story. It appears you'd written this as a single-chapter, self-contained story, but I hope you'll continue to write more chapters. The dynamic of a dominant couple subjugating the wimpy guy is really great!
it is usually customary to provide a warning for non heterosexual content in stories outside of those categories. Some people are going to be upset that said warning was included.
For the type of story it is, its very good. Solid imagery and vocabulary choice. Great writing for a short.