All Comments on 'There's a Girl in My Soup Ch. 03'

So he has her and never looks her up when they get back? That seems unlikely. Would have liked a better explanation at the end. Or a follow on chapter.

Reality sucks, doesn't it. Like your writing. Just keep hitting delete, it won't make things better.

Don't you just love these anon comments that litter literotica . Ugh

Really enjoyed this story. Wish it was a true story.

Ed and his feelings might make an interesting story .

for this genre.

Or the author had the courtesy to post an introductory statement.

It is too late after the fact.

last at least 3 weeks?

Who did she fuck next.

I have never left a really negative comment before, but I am making an exception now. This is the most fucked up story concept I ever have read on this entire site. Cockold isn't strong enough for this idiot. SICK and stupid.

Literotica needs a category about "Cuckold" stories only. It would be full in no time with stories missed placed in other categories.

One Star, nothing more needs to be said.

How did this trash rate so high? The willing cucks must have been all out today.

There is a place for stories like this, in the shredder!

Great story.

If they were really interested to hear Ed's story, the only proper way was to invite him to their apartment. Then hubby would leave, after again setting up the camera (or cameras). As they explore their feelings, the temptation would be there to explore other things. ...and a whole new movie to keep them going!

Sick is all I can say. What sane husband would have another man take her virginity at the wedding reception no less. And the virgin bride going along with all of this debacle just adds to the insanity. Gets 1 star vote and lower if it was possible. This author has a fixation of cheating and adultery for newly wedding. It is too bad the author does not focus on something else with a little more substance as the writing style is good only the subject matter really stinks. Again another 1 star from me.