All Comments on 'There's an App for That Ch. 04'

I really like the underlying idea.

I like the each of the chapter. I hope that you'll write the next chapter soon.

Blah... Keeping the protagonist apart from his slaves so much just makes the entire story feel bland. Not personal enough to invest anything. Then the lame way the screens have to stay involved just amplifies that feeling. In a sex story... Not a good idea.