All Comments on 'They Met in a Diner Ch. 02'

This was a very sweet development to this story. Love all your writing, and so excited to see what's next! There was one small edit mishap: there may have been a find and replace from Matt to Gilbert at one point that went overboard, leading to a sweet morning on a Gilbertress and a little girl replying Gilberter of factly.

Very well done. Good characters, interesting storyline. I certainly hope you are planning at least a chapter 3 for this pair. More than that would be welcome too. Thank you for sharing this with us.

I hope we will get a chapter 3.. and more. Pleaseee

Really well written. Understanding that life throws curve-balls, here is hoping we don't have to wait another year for the next chapter :-(

Both sexy and romantic.

Really enjoyed it.

Thank you for the effort and time and love you put into this story.

Please write more of this story. It’s wonderful.

I am really enjoying this story and would love to read more of how Emily and Max’s relationship develops.

Please write more to this story soon. I'm so enthralled with this story I can't wait to read more and see how their relationship plays out. Thank you for a wonderful story so far and not just some wham bam than you mam kind of thing. I prefer stories with some depth to them and pull the reader into the story. Please write more soon. I'm anxious to see how their story continues.

Poignantly erotic story about two very interesting women falling in love. I hope that we learn more about their relationship (soon). 😊

Several “more please” comments surely convince you to share more - poignant, erotic, great characters

Oh my god I love this series so much Just read both and had a stupid grin on face for almost all of it. I know this hasnt been updated since january but you have no idea how much i want another chapter. God I cant wait to read the rest of your work next.

Your talent in writing poetry is great so fine sensual enchanting

I’m guessing by the amount of time that has passed that we won’t see another chapter. I was so caught up in this story I didn’t realize it had ended. So much of it unresolved, I still don’t really know how Max feels but I can’t imagine she doesn’t share the same feelings. I’d like some back story on max and why she isn’t dating men ... there are so many aspects of her that you haven’t touched on it developed. I guess I’ll just draw my own conclusions. Anyway thanks for this story it made me smile ...

I do hope one day you’ll return to share another installment of this wonderful story. In the meantime, I’m thankful you that wrote it at all.