All Comments on 'They Proposition Me'

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WindySwimmingWindySwimmingover 8 years ago
What?!

If that's the end & you leave it to the reader to complete the proposition - so unsatisfying. But that seems to be what's in the future for IT guy - more teasing, then a chastity cage with promises of release only possibly met. Not a cheery vision.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Well shit!

That non ending sucked and earned the whole story a "1".

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Nice!

Very original start. Ignore the hater trolls, this has tons of potential!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Taught = past tense of teach

Taut = tight, tense

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