All Comments on 'They're Watching in the Dark'

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WargamerWargamerabout 2 years ago

Cuck shit scores 1/5

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

A great shared experience. Very good.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

My girlfriend and I invited my cousin and his girlfriend over to watch movies one night. We have one of those pit sofas that are just like a big bed. During the movie I noticed that my GF and his were stroking each other. Pretty soon they were kissing. We watched as they sipped hands into each other’s shorts and were fingering each other. My girl sipped off his girls shorts and panties and went down on her. After she came my girl flooded on her back and expected the same. His girls said she wasn’t sure she could eat pussy but loved sucking dick. My cousin piped up that he loved eating pussy. He went down on my girl and his went down on me. After a bit we both got to fuck them doggystyle side by side. Best movie night ever. I couldn’t tell you what we watched.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I like stories where things aren’t planned.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Beautiful story! Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Story was weak, but the comments are ridiculous. Did either of you bother to read the description of what is in "Loving Wives"? Get a grip! Wives having sex with other than their husbands, with or without permission. Grow Up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Responding to last comment about willing cuckoldry being Fetish. Good point. Fetish cuck writers dominate the Loving Wives category because of the sheer volume of readership and responses, unlike the fetish category where the scores are okay but the feedback is dismal. They love the attention they're getting in this category, although most are negative and the scores are mostly low. They relish the positive response from the cucks. Just a thought. 1* for this garbage.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Talent free scribbler got another Dreck from the local latrine cum-farted walls.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Really? He was the only one not drugged and let it happen? And while being fucked by another man the wife said "I love you"! For real? Trying to calm her husband with a drugged lie? She and the friend showed no respect for him! That's what makes this a very bad story! Lowest rate possible

26thNC26thNCabout 2 years ago

1 Star

Sick of cucks.

26thNCuck Disapproved

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

The joy of seeing our troll pull out his lame ass war gamer persona. Just one more notch on his bedpost of stupidity.

iameaseliameaselabout 2 years ago

Totally boring and dumb cuck shit.

The mentally ill gay dudes arent letting up at all lately.

LenardSpencerLenardSpencerabout 2 years ago

What a weak, pathetic arsehole of a husband. When does HE get to fuck Grace? Or is he just a permanent cuck? Perhaps Grace will take Evie to bed, since she had admitted she is bi, then Grace and Lucas can fuck Evie all night long while cuck Olie gets to sleep alone, moaning about how unfair it all is, like a little bitch.

This story is all about the cuck's spineless attitude and doormat backbone.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Fuck that haters, this was a good ass story! And these bitches are mad cause they couldn't right a better story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Thanks, I enjoyed it. That was always one of my fantasies too, and especially the part where she tells him she loves him ;P

jsala266jsala266about 2 years ago

What else happened? We need to know.

CoolboiyzCoolboiyzabout 2 years ago

What a great story!

Loved it , please post next part asap. What happended next.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

That was SOOOO fucking hot! Thank you!

We want second part, what will happen next

Pls pls bring more!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

you go on and on. I LOVE YOU PLEASE DON'T STOP YOUR STORYS...NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I have thoroughly enjoyed this story, with its twists and intrigue. Thank you for sharing. I will be off to your second part soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I was just getting so aroused because of your word craft and their relationship with so much promise of loving fucking and you just pull the rug out from under me! Please consider Chapter 2

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Thats what we call Erotica!

Hoping for the sequel for it.

Please also bring characters discription with more details age, dick & tits size to fatasize more deeply with series.

And specially fuck those haters, they showcase morals here then why they came to literotica. Go get some faith books. Stupid fellows.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

We want next part ...so so erotic.

Cant wait what going to be next - accidental seduction & resistance between Lucas & Eviie.

Longshnks69Longshnks69about 2 years ago

Unfinished here. Definitely needs another chapter. Very erotic though

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Erotic as hell

Expecting something will happen on friday morning - evie & lucas. Maybe he want to fullfil big boob fetish with evie.

Same way oliver get chancvto pound grace.

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Nowabout 2 years ago

Hot. Yeah, quite hot. But, ended too soon. Next part, please?

CoolboiyzCoolboiyzalmost 2 years ago

Pls pls bring the nxt part

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