All Comments on 'Thief to Slave to??'

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AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Great story and decent writing. I do hope you continue this series.

whiterabbit0117whiterabbit01173 months agoAuthor

Those who have read my other stories know that me screwing up names is not new. Sorry about that switch,

Sir and Master are both titles used in DS relationships. I prefer Sir and in my 20+ years in lifestyle all my subs have used that title.

My engineering trained logic predates AI by several decades.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Anyone else think this is AI generated? The Gloria/Sharon thing seems not like something a human would do. Nice story but a little off?

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

liked it, although the Gloria/Sharon name change in the middle of the story was unusual

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

If you re-write and eliminate the use of Sir and substitute with Master, it might have worked better. Who is named Sir, these days? Sir is a title like Mister.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Part 2 please, hope she chooses mark.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Hate the tease at the end.

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Sorry for delays in updating stories. Issue with one drive deleted all WIP as well as my copy of all posted stories from both my PC and the One Drive cloud. Ongoing stories will eventually be continued, but no timeline is promised. Experienced poly dominant, involved in the ...

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