by litfan10
A very sweet story, I understand that many readers will ask you to republish it. I really loved it.
5 * for you.
I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.
Hey TheOldRomantic:
Thank you very much for your kind words. I am so glad you enjoyed it.
You wrote your comment very well regardless of non-native English.
Thank you again and please feel free to leave comments or email me about my works any time.
Thanks - LF
Simple, child-like and passionate.
It's great.
Thank you
HP
Hey arrowglass! I'm so glad you found this and enjoyed it. It was pure fun to write. Thanks as always for the kind words.
Take care - LF
Hey HP:
Thank you. I remember when I wrote this seven years ago that I was going for an 'over-the-top' Hallmark channel emotional feeling.
As the son was a huge part of this, I let him control the tone and am still glad I did.
Glad you enjoyed it and thanks again for your comment - LF
Thank you, this was one of the sweetest Christmas tales I've read.
Hey Spencerfiction: Thank you very much for your kind words. I'm glad you liked it. Honestly, check out "Christmas Calamities" by 36FF_Tiki. It is also a wonderful story (or at least I think so!)
Thanks again.
LF
I can barely see through the tears, but I can definitely tell why they wanted you to bring this one back! Please keep writing!!
This one made me tear up...even reading it for the second time. Great work LF10. Keep it up. Glad to see you back and writing.
Nice touch with lost and found, and not giving back gifts from Santa.
I loved that sweet tale. Thank you so much author!
What a wonderful story. As has been said, much thanks go to the author for sharing it with all of us. No doubt that this is a 5 Star effort.
Didn't expect so much in just 2 pages. Wonderful, could have been 4 pages with more details about their past and an epilogue. But this is one of my favourite Christmas story!
Very Beautiful, Touching, und Romantique!
I love the lines...
Julie Simmons smiled at the staring boy, "Hi, what's the matter?"
Thomas' mouth opened and closed a couple of times. "Can you...can you transform?"
"What? Oh this." Julie looked down at the wheelchair she was sitting in. "Ah, well it is a part of me and helps me move."
EXACTLY what a 4 year old would say.
11/10 Transforming Wheelchairs!!!!!