All Comments on 'Thieving Santa'

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TheOldRomanticTheOldRomanticalmost 7 years ago
Sweet story

A very sweet story, I understand that many readers will ask you to republish it. I really loved it.

5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.

litfan10litfan10almost 7 years agoAuthor
Response to TheOldRomantic

Hey TheOldRomantic:

Thank you very much for your kind words. I am so glad you enjoyed it.

You wrote your comment very well regardless of non-native English.

Thank you again and please feel free to leave comments or email me about my works any time.

Thanks - LF

arrowglassarrowglassalmost 7 years ago
Wonderful story!

Thanks for bringing it back and sharing!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
what a good story

Simple, child-like and passionate.

It's great.

Thank you

HP

litfan10litfan10almost 7 years agoAuthor
Response to arrowglass

Hey arrowglass! I'm so glad you found this and enjoyed it. It was pure fun to write. Thanks as always for the kind words.

Take care - LF

litfan10litfan10almost 7 years agoAuthor
Response to Anonymous (HP)

Hey HP:

Thank you. I remember when I wrote this seven years ago that I was going for an 'over-the-top' Hallmark channel emotional feeling.

As the son was a huge part of this, I let him control the tone and am still glad I did.

Glad you enjoyed it and thanks again for your comment - LF

SpencerfictionSpencerfictionalmost 7 years ago
Very sweet

Thank you, this was one of the sweetest Christmas tales I've read.

litfan10litfan10almost 7 years agoAuthor
Response to Spencerfiction

Hey Spencerfiction: Thank you very much for your kind words. I'm glad you liked it. Honestly, check out "Christmas Calamities" by 36FF_Tiki. It is also a wonderful story (or at least I think so!)

Thanks again.

LF

JJMemaw0623JJMemaw0623almost 7 years ago
Wonderful & Heartwarming!

I can barely see through the tears, but I can definitely tell why they wanted you to bring this one back! Please keep writing!!

joep01joep01over 6 years ago
Damn!

This one made me tear up...even reading it for the second time. Great work LF10. Keep it up. Glad to see you back and writing.

rightbankrightbankover 6 years ago
Tommy is way too cool for a 4 year old, I like him a lot

Nice touch with lost and found, and not giving back gifts from Santa.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
OMG that was so very good 5 stars

I loved that sweet tale. Thank you so much author!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

What a wonderful story. As has been said, much thanks go to the author for sharing it with all of us. No doubt that this is a 5 Star effort.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
DAMN!

Didn't expect so much in just 2 pages. Wonderful, could have been 4 pages with more details about their past and an epilogue. But this is one of my favourite Christmas story!

SatyrDickSatyrDickalmost 2 years ago

Very Beautiful, Touching, und Romantique!

I love the lines...

Julie Simmons smiled at the staring boy, "Hi, what's the matter?"

Thomas' mouth opened and closed a couple of times. "Can you...can you transform?"

"What? Oh this." Julie looked down at the wheelchair she was sitting in. "Ah, well it is a part of me and helps me move."

EXACTLY what a 4 year old would say.

11/10 Transforming Wheelchairs!!!!!

lowkeyonelowkeyone3 months ago

WOW. What a fantastic and very well-told story. THANK YOU VERY MUCH.

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