All Comments on 'Third Date Rule Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

This is hot af. Love Daron already!

dpwriterdpwriterabout 3 years agoAuthor

Thank you, Anon! We'll see how you feel about him after the next installment... dun-dun-DUN!

LabeautifullLabeautifullabout 3 years ago

This was so beautifully written..... I want MORE! Please update soon.

RobJasperRobJasperabout 3 years ago

Loved it! So sensual, descriptive and hot. Looking forward to more chapters!

bienclarbienclarabout 3 years ago

Really enjoyed this! Can't wait for Ch2

DevonCowboyDevonCowboyabout 3 years ago

Nice piece of writing and you decribed Daron's piece very nicely! I would happily fill in for Tom anytime.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Loved Daron and Tom eager for ch2 much love

Timeless13579Timeless13579over 1 year ago

Great writing! Concise but descriptive, the action built at a perfect pace

Tenderfather55Tenderfather556 months ago

One of your fav writers is Call me Daddy?

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Smutty stories with heart! I'm interested in taking some of the hottest but most tired tropes and making them satisfying. Want to give all readers some figurative (and hopefully literal) happy endings. I'm a gay bottom-vers who loves to chat about everything, including se...