All Comments on 'Third Time's The Charm'

Vanilla, do description of the characters, it read like a first time attempt.

Silly ending. **

You probably meant giddy rather than 'gitty'

I must have missed the second time (or perhaps the first).

Decent 1st story though. Keep it up.

Good story. Very well written. And the descriptions of their coupling was very vivid. Would have liked to know more about what lead up to them fucking.

A dick can not pierce the cervix and enter the womb. It's actually difficult to get a catheter through 1/16 th of an inch in diameter. The cervix is tortuous inside, not a straight shot thru.

It's a good well written story.

I liked the story and would like for you to write more please

Good story! I just wish you made it longer and more detailed.

nice story please write some more

Good story with the right outcome…..we don’t know much about the mother though and she comes across a little too innocent, like a nice Girl Scout who just earned a health merit badge… Would like to see her more as an incredibly selfish, manipulative little slut, she must have been so ecstatic to feel her virile son losing all control and just helplessly pumping away into her hot fertile unprotected cunt…calmly lying on her back and giggling as she knows she’s changed his life forever….

Good story. Keep writing and disable comments so you don’t have to put up with some of these stupid posts.