by MaggieG
I loved the story,but, I hope you are not still thinking of adding Peter into the mix of a lover to Audrey. He is not needed,and would only served to ruin Audrey and Maggies love story thus far. As much as Audrey and Maggie's relationship has been through Peter's character is an unwelcome distraction for their relationship, and is not needed. I really enjoy these two together and cannit wait to see how and where their .
love takes them as a couple. Thanks TonlyT
Even though the guys in there , it's a awesome story . You have to be tested to see if you are meant to be. You are an excellent writer sweetie , keep up the good work.
then write about it and stop this kind of crap
You keep writing. The story's great. And for those that think the guy is going to be mixed in as a lover, seriously did you actually read what's written or what you want to see? Because as far as I can tell the guy, Peter, was just moered by Maggie, and Audery slapped him and turned him down... So clearly he has no future. The girls will stay together.
This story is great, I love the romance between Maggie & Audrey. The surprise for Maggie was so cute, keep the chapters coming!
Peter definitely serves a purpose - he's doing his job well, especially for a "lesbian" category story: He's providing tension and conflict without actually fucking anyone. A story without those, you'll find, is quickly put aside - at best it's aimed at a five-year-old, because reading a story without conflict is like drinking sugar water - it's certainly sweet, but lacks flavor and interest.
That said, the guy better not succeed in his attempts at intrusion!
5 stars, it seems that Audery did indeed make the right choice, but to say maggie over stepped herself is an understatement, I would not want to stay where I know I was not wanted, even if it meant giving up a good life style, but that is just me I hope there is a part 7 coming
Interesting story, well-written with a good plot-line, and five stars for that. It's a shame that not one of the characters was really likeable---I ended up not caring what happened to any of them.