All Comments on 'This Is Our Story Ch. 07'

It’s been a while, huh? Kinda missed you. I’m honestly blown away by the quality of writing here, and this chapter is home-and-away the best one so far! It’s a concept I’m real interested in, but have never been able to put into words. Thanks for doing that for me, you may have just inspired a story from me!

It was going so good. But the last couple of chapters completely destroyed the story! Seriously?

This slow burn thing is painful. Chapters are awesome and too short. I can't wait for 8.

I'm getting off here. The guilt ridden aspect is a turn off and its wrecked the eroticism potential. There was so much potential in the concept.