All Comments on 'This Is What You Get Ch. 02'

I don't understand a lot about Indian culture, sometimes I wish you would translate spme those phrases to English. Lastly, not so much with your story but it is hard as an American to follow some of the relation titles even more confusion when I read some of the stories heck it is like sometimes it seems in-laws of in-laws have family titles when they are no direct relation it would help a little in the informal terms of endearment that are used in dialogue to make them convey the desired meaning to all that are outside your culture. Makes me end up skipping storyline that might aid in the back story or other events in the story would be clearer as to the action build up. Most of the folks well at least the ones I went to school with from your culture that live in my country close to where I am from have adopted using more American titles so we don't learn them. You did have a great story and I followed both chapters with ease, just some thoughts as I love incest stories and often when start reading them, you sort of hooked and the one of those culturial phrases comes up of a phrase in your native tongue and I don't know if it is or isn't key to the overall story. Thanks look forward to reading more of your works in the future.

Nice and hot story. Dont leave ur sister as you have mentioned. Thanks for the story

if you can't write using english names and terms DON'T post in the english area they have seperate areas for foriegn languages USE THEM NOT THE ENGLISH AREA

this series needs to be deleted and rewritten then run through a GOOD ENGLISH EDITOR. this story was way to hard to follow because you failed to use english terms and names' if you have to use terms and names from your language then write the whole story in your language and post it in the proper catagory they have one just for you nonenglish people USE IT NOT THIS ONE. posting a story in this condition drives readers away and you lose a lot of respect DO IT RIGHT OR NOT AT ALL NOW REWITE THIS SO CALLED STORY