All Comments on 'This Isn't a Romance Novel Ch. 03'

The twists, the turns, the funny banter. I love it. Please hurry this up!

I can't tell you how much I love this story! It's so different from the ones we usually see here, I love the comedy. The power that this story has, the international implications that this has, the access that this has.... This is legendary! It's so funny (edwina's gay supernatural fanfic just took me out NGL) I can't wait to find who the real killer is?? Do you think it's Donna??!!! Anyway, I'm eagerly looking forward to the next chapter! Thank you for making this one so nice, long and JUICY

What the hell kind of a mind comes up with this??? With every chapter, I get more and more confused. WHAT?! OMG! Come ONNNNN Chapter 4!!!

I knew something was up with the mom when she went on that bootyhole rant. lol.

Wow, this chapter took many unexpected turns, which I was not at all ready for. All I know is that I'm completely invested in LaToya and Dillon, so Edwina better not kill her. I have faith that LaToya will kick her ass.

I get this is supposed to be satire and it is somewhat funny but it seems so juvenile. Never stop writing especially if this is what you intent to do. I just couldn’t get through it like everyone else did, I skipped entire pages and ended up here. Good luck with the writing because it’s clear you have talent and have people who appreciate your brand of talent.