All Comments on 'Thomas' Misadventures Ch. 05'

Wow, after the last chapter I'm surprised that Seb did this to Thomas, but I suppose he's recognized Thomas' need for exhibitionism. Or perhaps something that Jamie said when confronted by Sebastian caused was the catalyst. Whatever it was, I'm looking forward to finding out where this goes from here.

Sebastian did this to Thomas because he knows that deep down Thomas loves exhibitionism, and is taking steps to help push him towards it. But he won't do anything like what Jaime did at the party

Really feels like, given his possessiveness, Seb should be against men touching Thomas. But meh; they didn't fuck him so maybe that makes a difference.

I've just read all of your stories over the past couple of days. they are really hot, and I love the descriptions and various scenes.

I did want to comment however, that here and there you seem to have some problems with tenses and and other inconsistencies, which can occasionally be difficult to understand. Also watch for your-you're.

Really enjoying this series and I hope to read more.