All Comments on 'Thorn Ch. 28-32'

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I typed that sentence and just couldn't resist, it seemed the exact place to pause - sorry it's a bit cheesy

You tease. That last line is how any who've read from the beginning feel. Now begins the weeks of withdrawal and cravings for the next installment. But, perfection is worth the wait.

Every story worth telling needs moments when it shows that it can handle some silliness. I found this story just after the re-release of chapters 1-6 and read as far as I could then. The story was amazing then, but the edited version is awesome. I'm really looking forward to the rest. When it lives up to the promises you've made, I will be a very happy reader.

Good luck going forward. I'll be waiting.

I know you aren't interested in excuses but I'm almost finished next segment but I was unwell, disappeared to a computer free nightmare for a week. and then when reading it back I found a huge continuity error - rewrite 7 lol

Anyway I'll have it submitted in the next 3 days at most then the team at lit. can get it out to anyone still reading

Thanks for your patience

JM