All Comments on 'Thorne Ch. 12'

Finally she gets it!

This was an amazing chapter!! Kal you always deliver in every story you do. But this one just took the cake! I was jumping up and down in my bed because Barb finally got it!! Lol. I even cried. Lol but anyway this was outstanding!! Can't wait to see what you have next! Keep up the good work like you always do! ♥ツ

Best yet and that is saying something. A great chapter that stands by itself without gimmicks or sex, just great writing. Looking forward to more.

just let her freaking die already

Im in tears over here. She made the right choice a hard choice but one she needs to grow and become better so she can mother Aiden. Shell be back maybe her and Thorn can work it out . This was Throne's story a story of his growth and why he is how he is we know Barbs story but now I think her change will make the family come together as a whole. They need Barb as she needs them

When Justine and Quinn would appear in this story.

love it keep going to the next chapter. please bring barb back in the next chapter.

more more more more.......................................................................... it had me crying joyful and sad but happy all at the same time. please don't wait to long for the next chapter to thorne. i love how all the other vampire series are connected. please dont tak to long for the next chapter

of this excellent story. I can not wait to read more about Thorne and Barb as well as the rest of the Sinclaire bunch please post soon

You gave us a long wait... But you compensated with a very long chapter. THANK YOU.

Please hurry with chapter 13.

I know there is hope for Barb and Thorne.

Best so far... You even made it possible to hope Barb will come to her senses. Her leaving was for the best currently, but i can also see something could happen to bring her back to her family mate and child. It is in her to change and be a better person, she just needs to spend sometime away from everyone and everything she knows and have a pity party. her being a part of the alliance will bring her back and I think things will work out for all involved. I hope you post soon. I love IWLYF and Reese, but I can wait for those. Please post Thorne again soon!!! Great job

Good chapter so far and hope so many More coming soon , love Thorne story!

Wow... My heart just hurts for Barb. Knowing your so screwed up and still have no clue to the depths of how much? Not being able to love your own child? Just....wow....wow...

I hope there's more to come! 😍

I love all your stories but the Sinclairs, Blackwells and Yancys are especially awesome. I also love that the Queen and King are watching. I was wondering when we would see them again. Love them as well. Can't wait to see what happens. Hope Barb can get over herself someday and be happy, maybe even with Thorne and Aidan. Not holding my breath though. Please post more soon. It is so hard to wait!

Kal you hit it out the park with the bases loaded. I wonder what is in store next for the Sinclair, Blackwell, and Yancy clan.

Believe it or not.. I believe Aiden and Thorne will have a wonderful adventure together. I loved the update... Please add one more chapter...

If this is the end of the Thorne saga, so be it. Although I would like for it to never end. Life is never scripted and happily ever after is not a guarantee. To read an erotic story that goes against the grain of fantasy reality is very refreshing.

I am like most of your readers when Aiden held his little hand out to Barb and she did not take it we were hopeful. That scene is what sets you apart from other writers. Your readers are invested in your stories and their characters. We will come to the site primarily at times to solely check for your updates. When you mentioned sex was not included in this update your legion of followers were still here.

I know that this story, this series is far from over...... I simply wanted to take time out and thank you for sharing

.- Sonja

I hope this isn't the end of Thorne's story, but even if it is, I have to say this was on of the most powerful chapters I have ever read, I found myself wanting to cheer for Barb, damn that was a scary thought

Thank you for sharing this story with us.

I am so happy to see the that Aidan and well I will just call her Kandy are finally here. Aidan will be loved by his father and all of his uncles and aunts. This was such a moving chapter made me hopefully that maybe Thorne will find a mate that will create love in his heart. It definitely ain't Barb, she will only ever be a hateful shrew.

I am one of your biggest cheerleaders.I have read everything you've written and am still clamoring for more. I liked the way you wrote Barb here. In the story she did what was best for her and that baby. Do I wish they could have a HEA, yes. But not stories end happily. I can accept that. 5 stars, wish i could give you 500.

I don't know how you do it. One awesome story after another and the blog too!

wow. im crying. i know the baby is going to be fine but how can barb leave him. how cold hearted is she. plz plz give her help but i have a feelling that she'll never come back. ill still pray she does. keep it up. if all your stories were in books ill buy them all and reread them. if it was a movie ill buy the first ticket to it i can. your stories are outstanding.

This story has plenty of hero's. Keep Barb as the selfish bitch she was meant to be. I enjoy it when Barb gets whatever is coming to her.

I want to keep the candle burning for Barb. I really liked this chapter and of course will be waiting for the next.

This chapter had me wrung out. I was beyond upset that the baby had to feel Barb's sting of rejection. That hurt more than anything I believe you have ever written. Aiden did not ask to be conceived, and to be rejected by the careless person who could not use him for her own selfish reasons, it's just a lot to take in. I have stopped thinking about Barb simply because she chooses her single-minded, self-centered, mean-assed behavior, and because of that I simply have no use for her in my world. It is interesting that she can discard her son knowing that he will be cared for and loved by others. What if she were and orphan, what if Thorne was really just like her and rejected their baby. Would Barb have thought differently about just leaving him to the four winds? I have to take Barb out of my thoughts because she makes you hurt for those she harms. Her family is so loving, Barb is Barb, but in all honesty, she partly did the right thing. She did not pretend to want a child and subsequently abuse it because there is no love given on her part. I did not think that Barb would see the baby and change her fundamental reasoning. I did however want to believe that she would at least hold him before she decided to escape. Barb is a coward, and cowardly people in real life take the life of others. Cowardly people blame others for their corrupt behavior. If they have any fear, it is that people will treat them in the manner that they have treated the entire free world. I am in awe of your imagination. I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE CELESTE!!!!! She stays with her cousin as much as she can, she is his love blanket and advocate..., Aiden is loved, it is just sad that he was incubated and born from a being that could not even supply common courtesy. Wow, To see the difference in how a person can enter the world in love as opposed to haste. "Push and you'll be free." Those words spoken to his mother is what propelled Aiden into the world. That is damn sad. But look at Thorne's love and devotion to their creation. It is a wonder because Thorne was simply awful in the beginning. To know that he is willing to go to therapy, deal with his mother's transgressions, shed much of his ego and pride to give his child a life filled with the love he himself just did not have is more than commendable. Between Celeste and Aiden, Thorne will learn and laugh and share love. And that is worth crying for. As for the others, I am hopeful that they continue in laughter and love as well. THIS CANNOT BE THE END?! LOL, Wait, Barb is not his mate!!!! When did that happen?! Did all her denial make the fates cry too?! Were they feeling ashamed by their meddling? Hmmmmm. IT'S NOT OVER!!!! YEA!!!!!

Life is all about evolution. I love this series. This chapter was awe inspiring. Thank you.

Enough said.

Even doe people would call me crazy. Lol. I still want Barb and Thorne together. I still feel like they can be together. They can grow and work together and become better mates and most of all a family for their son. At least she is finally being honest with herself. Lord knows it's not finna be easy for her but she's trying. I just want them to be family and be together! The fates put them together for a reason!

Barb and Thorne need to find someone else as their mates. They are not compatible and need to move on with their life. Maybe Thorne can be with grown-up Celeste.

Please say no. I still want Thorne and Barb to be together. They both need love so badly. Plus Barb has to accept Adian. Come on Don't leave me hanging. I love this story too much.

That was the best chapter yet! Fantastic job can't wait to see what happens next. Threw me off when Quinn and Justine commented in there but glad they are still keeping track of what is going on.

Great story,

Dave

Loved every word of this chapter as I have all others. Being a mother I damn near cried when Barb wouldn't hold him, and Aidan reached out to her. Can't imagine that sort of pain.

I'm looking forward to reading more about Barbs further change, and I'm also of the mind that she and Thorns should work it out. I think they will be good together, once the both get thirst issues in order.

Loved the note if hope you ended on, it gives me something to live for until the next part comes out!

She actually did it! They may be baby steps, but she took them! Excellent job.

i love all the stories dealing with this family

I still have hope that Barb and Thorne will be able to move pass the hurt and end up mates officially.

This was my favorite chapter so far. I have really enjoyed all of your stories and can not wait for the next installment You have a real gift for writing. Hope to see you publish the entire story someday. I really want to see where Noel's story is going. Is Celest the eyes in the picture, is she is mate? Are you going to write a story for Joesph? What ever you decide just kep writing and thank you for sharing your gift.

But it seems as though Barb may have given birth to her salvation...in the form of her conscience/that little voice that she only started hearing 9 months ago. Kal, it's a true testament to your writing that when she was initially introduced, I wanted to punch Barb in the face and choke her, and now I only want to slap her...on occasion LOL. Great storytelling as always.

Best one so far!!! I'm kinda hoping that that is where we leave Barb. I think time in a place like Haiwii will do her good. Can't wait to read what's next hopefully it's my favorite character Celeste

We all can not be mother's but maybe a friend. Even that sucks? Barbara hope you find what you looking for. Thorne I's the man at least he knows his limitation. Hope at least it has happy ending for all.

Awesome.

So glad we get to see some changes in Barb. I think that once she comes to grips with her past she's going to be a pretty decent person.

I really love this story, and the series. I saw the order of the series and I'm excited to read Joseph, I really wanted to know why Joseph was not in a good mood he seemed angry and really upset when I read Patrick or Lousie's story I can't remember which story it was; I just know its out of these two. But I can't wait to read Joseph and Victoria. Thanks Kalamazoo707 for this amazing series.

OMG! that was beautiful. I know adian will be a heart breaker and louise and nathans baby girl Congrats to both parents. I guess is time for barb to refind her self so she can come back and love that baby boy. More please more

Can't wait for the next chapter please don't leave us hanging

QueenBiggumz

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I couldn't believe barb left her baby...how could thorn and barb not be mates after all of this....

Love this story and I'm so ready to read the rest of it. I hope we see more of Barb, Aidan and Thorne. I'm tired of Louise and Nathan.

why no ch 13? it doesnt seem like it was finished just dropped.

The way this story ended seem as though this story as not ended yet. Barb as a gift but her attitude toward life has suppressed it. I would have loved to see her explore her feelings for Thorne; Thorne develop feelings for Barb and Barb reach out to Aiden before he grows up.

Good read. I thought this was the most interesting relationship in the Sinclair series. Although Thorn is not a Sinclair, his story overlapped theirs. I liked all of your stories, but I thought Thorn had more depth than the Sinclair men. Barb, though not liked by most fans, was the most complex of the women in my opinion.

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I understand there will not be a ch. 13 on line. I assume that is because you will finish the story when it's published. Good job and good luck.

Please tell me this isn't the last chapter

I like Thorn and Barb, where as I used to couldn't stand them I am glad she is getting herself together, and I love the connection she has with her son, regardless of how she is acting right now. and i think deep deep deep down Thorn and she love each other. Hope there is more where she cones back and reclaims her family.

Love your writing!

lot of people on here r on barbs side and i have to say that i am one of them. she is reallly messed up and she knew that she wasnt in a good place to mother a child. rather than screw him up she is taking her time to fix herself and look back on her problems. other that comment on her that shes selfish for that but would u rather her tell a lie and stay. no . she needs to get herself together to before she even thinks about coming back. i think throne and her could work it out if they really wanted to . i dont think fate messes up cause even when there were mates that didnt like each other did couple really try. for instance thrones parents. though hes father did hes mother didnt . if she put any effort into the relationship maybe it could have worked. idk but i think barb has issues and is doing the right thing for her child. i also think throne is way to hard on her. though barb can be so rude sometimes so can he maybe not as much as her but still. he doesnt want a mate so he never tried to get to know the person she is . he could have tried to bring out the better side of her helping them both grow or encouraged to go to therapy but he didnt he was just cruel to her and did the same thing hes mother did and threw money inn her face to makeup for the lack of what should have been a relationship. even though thats what she wanted it clearly wasnt mean to be like that. i hope that there will be a break through for both of them and that they will get together and barb will love aiden. even if that doesn that doesnt happen thorne will never be able to be a good father if he doesnt respect barb as much as he respects others such a louise. barb is gonna be ok she just needs to put in the work. again great chapter. I REALLY HOPE THAT U MAKE A BARB CHAPTER. she would be a great addition to the series. plus i want to see how she turns out.

lot of people on here r on barbs side and i have to say that i am one of them. she is reallly messed up and she knew that she wasnt in a good place to mother a child. rather than screw him up she is taking her time to fix herself and look back on her problems. other that comment on her that shes selfish for that but would u rather her tell a lie and stay. no . she needs to get herself together to before she even thinks about coming back. i think throne and her could work it out if they really wanted to . i dont think fate messes up cause even when there were mates that didnt like each other did couple really try. for instance thrones parents. though hes father did hes mother didnt . if she put any effort into the relationship maybe it could have worked. idk but i think barb has issues and is doing the right thing for her child. i also think throne is way to hard on her. though barb can be so rude sometimes so can he maybe not as much as her but still. he doesnt want a mate so he never tried to get to know the person she is . he could have tried to bring out the better side of her helping them both grow or encouraged to go to therapy but he didnt he was just cruel to her and did the same thing hes mother did and threw money inn her face to makeup for the lack of what should have been a relationship. even though thats what she wanted it clearly wasnt mean to be like that. i hope that there will be a break through for both of them and that they will get together and barb will love aiden. even if that doesn that doesnt happen thorne will never be able to be a good father if he doesnt respect barb as much as he respects others such a louise. barb is gonna be ok she just needs to put in the work. again great chapter. I REALLY HOPE THAT U MAKE A BARB CHAPTER. she would be a great addition to the series. plus i want to see how she turns out.

I can see that Barb has a long way before she can have a truly happy family like her siblings. She has to learn to love herself and attempt to correct her horrible mistakes. The way I see it she has to completely change and become the exact opposite of her current personality. In order for her to get her family (Thorne and Aiden) back she has to sacrifice her own happiness. Meaning she will come to realise that she loves Thorne and her son but because she has lost their trust she could plan to sacrifice her immortality choosing to become old so that Thorne could have a chance to get life mate who could make him happy. Thorne could meet the woman who seemingly deeply cares for him and his son fooling everyone, but in the end realises that Barb truly loves him and not his money.

There’s a chance for barb and Thorne I think they’ll work things out and be loving parents to Aiden she may not have wanted children but I think she’ll surprise herself and be a great mom. They need this separation to help them realize what they need to be the best version of themselves. Barb and Thorne will be okay I think they’ll make it and turn out to be a wonderful couple.