All Comments on 'Those Eyes'

Cool start. Can't wait to read what happens next.

Maybe you should read again because that's not what it says

Once second she's on the floor of the library crying...next thing she's heading out the door to get on her bike? You really need to define the past from the present! A ------ or something!

Somehow I lost track of this story. I remembered liking it and decided to start at the beginning again as I get caught up.

so far so good

intriguing start and nicely written ;0)

well done, i loved everything about this story.

and something you should be proud of. I hope this is the first in a series that will continue the adventure of just who she is. I will keep my eyes open for chapter two of "Those Eyes". I wish you much success as an author and if this story is any indication of your talent, you are on your way!

nice beginning to the story .... continue writing