All Comments on 'Those Eyes Ch. 10'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
*****

Wow! I can't believe Ara kidnapped Santana.

But I see Ara wasn't thinking too clearly knowing that Aaron will be able to find her through their bond.

I guess the next chapter can be called "love and bloodshed"

Great chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Love the story

Great story. Enjoyed it a lot. Thanks

EroticLitKittyEroticLitKittyalmost 12 years ago
Oh my gosh you're killing me!

I love this story and I do hope that more is coming soon!

oneboobeeoneboobeealmost 12 years ago

More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

TakilaTakilaalmost 12 years ago
Love It

You have to update again soon

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
omg!!!!

Love your series!!!

SunKisstSunKisstalmost 12 years ago

Seriously, that aara girl needs a serious smackdown. I expect to see plenty in your next chapter

Lovely story, and I'll bet that all santana's sisters marry alex's bros, ad zach marries aislyn. Then they go to toWn and kick some serious evil doctor butt! How am I doing so far?

katgoddess1katgoddess1almost 12 years ago
Heatrbreaking

Poor Aara doesn't even understand what she is running away from. She is leaving the other half of her soul behind.

PoisonlovePoisonlovealmost 12 years ago
Loved it

The little sister will be Aara's teacher as to mating and so... I thought it would conclude different but you are doing great!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
ugh

Finish the damn story! I can wait no longer..

DoctimeDoctimeover 11 years ago
I'm Sad

Yes, I. Am really sad, cuz there is only one chapter left, and it was written in Sept. Now it is almost Christmas. I suspect this will be another great series left unfinished. What a shame?!?!?

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