by Catesby
Didn't spot that one coming ... And where do they hold fairs like that, then?
There seems to be a lot of people who take life far too seriously. I thought the idea was very erotic and it was nicely written, keeping the twist to the end. Ignore the anonomous knockers - D H Lawrence would be given a hard time in here
Of course non-clever people won't appreciate the nice twist at the end. The erotic parts were very "hardening" as well.
Something totally different and unexpected. Fun read and quite arousing before the fair. Don't mind the fantasies not the reality that would be coming though.
What is fun about sexualizing a confessional where real people troubled by their weaknesses turn to someone to help them in things ripping their world apart.
God deal with you as He will. There are endless subjects but there are always some no brains who think they can mock God or the people trying to help others in thinking all life is a joke.
I just hope when you hit bottom some clergy doesn't make a joke out of your problems.
good story, well written and cute punch line in the end. Keep writing, I think you will be good.
there more constucted things to do in a marriage.what happen when the games don't work.
describing the state of his imagination. I thought it was a fun read with a bit of a twist. Thanks for writing. Phil