All Comments on 'Thoughts are Like Books Ch. 03'

Your imagery was well done. The thoughts and conflicts going on were well written. The mind readers society was an especially good twist. I hope you continue this story much further.

You make the MC very easy to like and paint a great picture.

Three years between chapters is too long. Please write more soon. Like now soon.

Great writing -- no all-cap OOOORRRGGGAAASMS or multi-exclamation points!!!!, no detailed descriptions of cock-length or cup size, just good, unpredictable story-telling. Very glad you came back to continue the tale and I hope to read more soon.

really enjoying this story. just glad I've only just come across it and not had the long wait for ch 3 :)

hope you get ch 4 out soon...

A well fleshed out, believable MC story...ummm. Nothings better. Thanks for your hard work and please finish those last 5 chapters soon? :) Cheers!

Very well done and it's only getting better. I'm looking forward to reading more of this story. Hopefully soon. Thank you!

I just read thoughts-are-like-books enjoyed it very much

i hope you will add to it soon

Just discovered these first three chapters, very enjoyable! I especially appreciate how you describe the inner turmoil and conflict the main character experiences as he begins to use his newfound powers more and more. The introduction of other characters with mind control capabilities is a great plot twist offering many opportunities for development: collaborations, competitions, good and evil usage of the powers, and so much more. Similarly, your nuanced exposition of his limited ability to coerce others, rather than simply exhibiting brute force overwhelming control, is both believable and compelling. Also love the delayed/forbidden orgasm command, would love to see more of that particular kink! So glad I discovered this, already looking forward to your next installment. Thanks for the submission!

Really enjoyed that hope you will finish it at some point.

I enjoyed this, but then discovered it was just another unfinished work.

I thought you were headed to a very interesting tale, but like so many authors, you didn't feel the love and stopped