All Comments on 'Threads: The Island'

Please, you have to write more of this story...begging...just do it...

I've never taken the time to comment before on any of the stories i've read but this one was just too good not to. Incredible work. Please, please, please keep it up

Mate you need to continue this story, im half drunk, red eyed and got a serious buzz. Unbelievable read it twice already. Bloody good work sunshine keep it up and i BEG of you add some more to this already AMAZING story.

Please dear god continue that story sometime in the future! I have read quite of few of your works, that was the greatest by a margin! You have quite the talent for writing my friend.

please please please- this is work of art. So give us more of this. i am thinking how things are going on in LA and NY.

Simply mindblowing!!!!......

Character development better than most, a suprising entry for Literotica- an actual story with sex in it rather than a sex story. You seemed to be off target or off pace in only a few spots . As an editor l would have remover on 5-600 words, in a 42 page entry thats not too bad. Good work !

Keep em coming please this was just to damn good for u to stop it would be messes up if u didnt because this was just to damn good

Super hot, an intense read, and very vivid. More please....

less sex but interesting story!

Yes, there were a few spelling and grammatical errors but it was still a great srory.

In fact it could even be published as a book rather than 'just' a Literotica story!!

truly one of the great stories on this site. i do hope for more that continue this line and maybe even breaks off from it a little. just keep writing and allowing us to enjoy your work

I would love to see a sequel to this story please!

It would be a shame not to see more of this story continued. Absolutely, MORE PLEASE!

You are an evil person. I don't know you personally but I can tell. I was just browsing along looking for some fun stuff to read in my private time. And I stumble upon this this awesome awesome story(no sarcasm btw). And now after I've read it I don't want to read those short stories full of meaningless sex anymore. Now I'm searching for stories with a nice character development, real depth. Thanks for ruining Literotica for me.

On a different note I hope you release a sequel. Can't wait.

P.S.

For the slow ones out there I didn’t mean to offend. I loved the story. And in all seriousness the reason why I come to Literotica changed because of this great story. I actually skipped most sex scenes in The Island.

I think this is a very good read, could be film material. Ricky

...and you made me stay up reading till 5 AM, now I was exhausted all day but damn that was such a good read! Hope you release Part 2 soon, while you can find a lot of good short chapter stories in lit, it's pretty brave to release a 42 page episode for people to read.

Kudos to you, will be watching for the next release!

This is worth publishing. Absolutely the best. More please.

what a great story ,all my fantasies and kinks ---well nearly all.

thoroughly enjoyable. more please

omg please do more with the store line i loved it

and i didn't even read it for the erotic parts, except for when he fucked Katie and Kara which was so hot. If you wrote a book on this then published it I would definitely buy it, 5 stars!

I have spent every free minute in the last 2 days reading this on my phone! So good & not just for the sex scenes! Although those were amazing and definitely turn ya on ;p looking forward to reading more! Great work!!

very good story, a typo here and there but nothing major. Overall great story keep writing!

I think u should continue with it after theyre trips n stuff what happen with them when they get back n stuff read the whole story twice already

It seemed like a running joke in my author group that I was the only one who hadn't read this piece. I have done so now, in one sitting. Just awesome and beyond brilliant. The only thing I can say is I would have preferred it broken into smaller chapters and posted separately. But hey, thats a tiny critique compared to the stellar piece you have here. Don't stop.

since i'v started with my graduation, i can seldom do anything but sit on the laptop and browse through lecture notes and follow up matter and stuff. miss reading good stories. one fine day, in search of some "fun" landed upon your story and it completely gripped me. took me three days to complete (my personal worst) owing to my exams but totally worth every moment i read it. couldn't wait to finish studying and catch up on this. good job. nay, great job.

Hope to read more about Kyle if you haven't gotten bored of him yet. Maybe you should consider putting this and any other novels on amazon, do the self-publishing route and sell 'em for $0.99-$2.99 to drum up interest. I know it's longer, better written, and more engaging than most of the stuff I find on there.

So I haven't even gotten past page 8 and I think it's awesome. Your an amazing writer and when I saw that it was 42 pages long I was like holy cow its a book and I love reading books =D so i'd love to hear more of your stories ... well read them.

Sincerely,

Just a Reader

I just commented but I forgot a little something. My name is Kara so I thought it was funny how you made her the stripper. Made me proud of my name ;D So thank you! I'll have to let you know what I think of the rest when I finish.

Sincerely,

Just a Reader.. a.k.a Kara

I love your story. It is definitely a good read, but I was really, I mean REALLY disappointed with the situation Patricia and Kyle are in. I thought their relationship's gonna go some where :'(

oh well maybe Im just being a romantic.

It take a lot for me not to drift away from a story over 10 pages, but this one I just could not leave and had to read until the end.

I do hope you develop these characters into further books. A most desergved 5 out of 5,

Though I've never set up an account, I've been visiting this site fairly regularly for years, and I'm very happy to say that this is easily one of the top five stories I've discovered thus far. Your development of the characters came across very naturally, and I love how you managed to keep a lot of realism in an unbelievably surreal world - if most writer's on here had decided their characters had come into huge wads of cash, the rest of their stories would revolve on how they spent it, but you've focussed on the responsibilities that a Billionaire owes, which is something I've never even thought about before. I've also visited your blog, and I'm very happy to see how you're keeping the fans updated, and that a sequel is on the way. The only thing I'd like to change would be to see more of the sisters, their characters haven't come across all that much so far, but I daresay they will indeed become more apparent in the sequels. I'm aware that this is getting a little long, so I'll just say that I was happy with the length of it - I have no problem committing to a piece this long, as I'm a bit of a bibliomaniac, and I'm glad you haven't felt the need to break it up.

Finally, I'd just like to say: Thank You.

Best thing I've read on here

Everything kept me glued to the story.

The characters sounded so hot, the 3 main girls esp lol

Would love to read what happens when they come back from their business trips and whilst on them.

I'd love for Kyle n Patricia to get more serious.

This was an amazing story with great sex, plot, everything, and I literally can't wait for the next one!

I very much liked how all the sub-stories played together.

I have never commented on Literotica before but fet compelled to do so with this one. An excellent story line with suspense, good and varied sex. Not just crude explicit sex but real erotic reading. As an author you are an exception and like somebody else I read on here you should consider placing this on to Kindle

Thank you

Awesome read... I really enjoyed it and would have to be the best story I have read on this site and also the first time I have considered leaving a comment. Well done and I would love to read more from you.

This was a great story, once I started I could not stop. Please continue the story/series. I want more from the same characters. I don't comment on anything, but I must tell you all this was some great reading I cant wait to see the movie.

Absolutely stellar. Exceptional plot depth, and character development. It was truly sensual the way you used sex to enhance the story line. Rather than it being the main plot theme. Once started I couldn't put it down till finished. I'm looking forward to more of your works. Soon I hope! !!

Thank you very very much for writing that. I completely enjoyed that story. I was unable to put it down. Completely unlike me as I am not normally much of a reader.

thanks alot for writing that. it was an awesome read. really sounded like it happened. i'm still curious which of the girls from the "dating list" he finally decided to go out with. and major props for the bath scene, pretty much a new fav fantasy now. keep writing your doing great.

PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE give us more, this is an incredible story that can and should be continued!

JUST FINISHED, YOUR GREAT AND WHAT A STORY

Everytime I come online now... no matter how shitty my day, I have to reread this story.... I was reading this kick ass book when I first got caught up and since then....

I need more!

Like a fish needs water... I need more!!!

It's not just the character arc, the sex is titillating but the story is the driving force, I appreciate that more with each rereading.... If you ever decide to write books, which this would certainly qualify for at least half a novel, I'd spend my money on you, look for every book you've ever wrote and get them all. I did it with Alice Rice, George R R Martin and now I think you that your THAT good!

Great story, I couldn't stop reading it. When or where is the continuation? Please continue would love to read more!

God, I hope you make a continuation of this story. Honestly one of the most touching stories I have read in a long time. I hope you get more into the incest thing if you do make a continuation. :D

PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER ONE!!!!

One of the best stories I have ever read needs a continuation thou

I have loved reading this story, definatly needs a continuation

Loved it A+

Wow.

this is the best i have seen with my 5yrs reading literotica... personally im gonna recommend it as a book... Keep the ink flowing

this is really long, and took forever to read. for ease of readers could you break this up into smaller chapters? if only so we can find where we left off later

good read

Come on man, you gotta continue this story.

I read this story at a single sitting, unable to put it down until later. It is an extraordinary piece of writing, not just for this site, but anywhere. The characters were all well developed and the ending is a little bittersweet, just as every good piece of fiction is. I've got plenty of unanswered questions and I miss them all already. Thank you.

Very intense reading, plenty of action and well written. Ignore they guy who said it was to long, NO WAY ! ! ! ! ! !! Hope you continue the story, who gets the guy, Patricia, The Sisters or All Three. Hope to read more soon.

man i never thought i could read something like that one hell of a story amazing and great built of a story i wish to find more of your writing.

I loved the story. It was great. However, i get the impression that the author is English. The main characters were all from America but didn't speak like Americans... just saying...

I have been longing for a real story to get into and FINALLY you gave me just that. It's been a long time since iIve actually missed a meal or sleep to finish something worthwhile *grins* and i didn't mind it one bit!

This is absolutely fantastic! Kudos!

kara, kyle, and katie... KKK?

its an incredible story but if ur gonna write with american characters dont use british terminolagy for the the american characters.

I would really like to see this continue. It will take longer to read all the other comments than it did to read the story. The comments about British terminology out of the mouths of Americans was noticeable but not fatal. Kyle after all, is supposed to have grown up in San Antonio and not likely to have sounded like a Scot.

At any rate, a great story and well written. Looking forward to further chapters.

Really enjoyed the story , I'd really like to see it continue .

Ive read hundreds of stories in many different categories on this website and this was by far the best one ever! I have been waiting for the next one in this series and I sincerely hope its coming out soon!!

You are an incredible writer.

Wow. It's not long but if you put this out for sale, people will buy it.

God, forty two pages and only about six of them interesting. Too much use of 'celebrity' names, too much detail about an 'imaginary?' island and the writing is far too simplistic to be believable. All the references to smoking should be deleted as Kyle seems to be the only one addicted. An occasional brief mention would have sufficed.

Literotica have mis-categorised this story, as they so often do. The supposed 'incest' at the beginning does not count and the scene between Kara and Kyle at the end is only hearsay so is also not valid.

Really enjoyed this story. Hope it continues

loved this story please continue it!!!!!

Honestly, I have to say this is the best story I have read here. It wasnt a plotless series of poorly joined sexual encounters. Another thing I liked is that you kept taboo taboo. A lot of authors go overboard with it until its more commonplace then the social convention its replacing. Many thanks for the story, really looking forward to more.

I see you have said there will be sequels, however if it is not to much to ask, any idea of a timeframe?

you can make a movie from this! It was great

Amazing story, definitely one of the best on here. I like that it was a story first and sex second. It really made it a worth while read. Any timeline on a sequel? I would love to read more about Kyle, Patricia and his sisters.

Loved it. Worth making a tv series/ movie from it. Some grammar mistakes though

Like a good book you can't put down. Dreaming is good for the soul! Thanks for the sweet dreams!

I love the story and hope for a sequel. While I did not agree with Patricia, I did see the need for their separation though I do hope they get together on a more permanent level in the future. Please let us all know if your planning on a sequel and possibly a time frame though I'm sure it will take some time.

brilliant, you are a great story teller.I loved it.

really good story you have a real tallent funny and horny

The best I have ever read, without a doubt.

Great story ! Hope to hear more in th near future.

Hope Patrica falls in amazing in love with Kyle. Keep up the good work.

dude please tell me you're still alive, i checked your blog and i saw that the latest post was last year and i don't want this story to end yet :(!

I hope you are not a one shot wonder!

Please continue with this storyline. If not, then start a new one! I'm not easily impressed with writers, but you did.

Holy fuckberries! When is the next one gunna be ready?

THREADS IS ABSOLUTELY THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ ON THIS SITE OR ANY OTHER!!!

KUDOS TO THE AUTHOR

A very interesting story enjoyed very much. I'd like the story to continue,with

details of Kyle's "physical" relation with Karen and Kara revealed. Bob R.

Dude, you completely rocked my mind. It's so long i had to read it in two runs but it's really good man. When i stopped reading the first half and took a brake, i couldn't stop thinking what would happen next... It's really good dude. You got so much talent. Can't wait for whatever you come up with next.

Congrats.

I seriously spent days reading this when I had extra time in my schedule. You need to start writing books so I can buy all of them! I completely enjoyed the story line and the incredible amount of detail you put into the story, its characters and their backgrounds. This is easily the best story I've encountered on Literotica and I was sad to see it end. 5 stars and a round of applause!

thanks for a great read so far, you are obviously practiced in your writing style and I have greatly enjoyed what you have shared to date. Shalom.

This honestly is the BEST story on Literotica. I got so drawn into it that I read the first 35 pages from the tiny screen of my cell phone. HONESTLY! Please, keep writing, and don't ever stop! :D :D <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

great story, much better than most books and was sexy! i wish you made it longer!

One of the best stories I have ever read on this site. This wasn't a great sex story, it was a great story. Please write more.

Great story, big fan.

Awesome story. Loved every word of it. Wondering if there will be more? Keep up the great work!

Great book sometimes it was unclear who the speaker was and could more sec especially Incest that's why I'm in this section, and how about a sequel

Any idea.as to when the short storys or sequal will be posted u havent posted in 6 months

And better grammar would be a plus, too. Otherwise, very entertaining.

When are you going to add more threads that continue the story, good start, but leaves a lot open and some readers may like to see more of what happens.

Seriously Pal, how long did it take you to write this story? you might as well make yourself a small novel and sell it. 45 WEB PAGES!

This wasn't a short porn story but it was very interesting and well written. Never mind the clown who complains about grammar and spelling.

Awesome, simply put! Well written story, and it's not to long. I can't wait for more chapters too come. Please keep writing and I will keep reading.

I took a star off for the length. I found myself skimming sections that didn't add to the story for me, like business details and lists of female celebrities etc. Otherwise I liked the story and the characters and the erotic scenes, especially the first couple, very tender and hot. Thanks.