All Comments on 'Threads: The Island'

Too bad, soo sad

This was easily my #1 favorite story in the entire database! Very in-depth with excruciating amounts of detail and the plot, how amazing! Well done!

pretty sure the guys is dead or quit the business check out his blog, has not posted in a long time

http://jammyjimmy.blogspot.ca/

one of the best stories or book ive read in a long time

Lucky I own the company or I would have been fired being on the computer for a whole day reading. Very good

Add more please, you got me looking for more. I have been readind this at work and and at home, I could not stop reading this story. Great job but there has to more to this story then this please don't leave us hanging like this

Your ability to keep a story's continuity going was wonderful. I enjoyed this short story immensely.

This story had me up untill 7 in the morning reading it. I just couldn't stop myself. I'm very surprised to see such a well written story lurking in the archives of literotica and I am very happy to have stumbled across it. If any kind of update or addition to this story was created I believe that many people would gobble it right up. Fantastically written with a well-grounded base in realism. Very good read.

I believe that Jammy Jimmy is James E Alexander from Hahira, Georgia. Couple seconds of googleing got me that and no obituaries have him in it.

[If dead was referring to his lack of updates then i'm sorry to have wasted 2 minutes of my time]

This was simply said an outstanding story and your Audience deserving to know what happen to the characters in the plot. Either let them know you have given up or Complete the story.

Sequel please, I spent like 5 hours reading this at once and now I feel bad, Sequel sequel please!

this is one of the best stories i hvae read in this site.

More of same or a sequel please.

the best-written story on this site. No contest. Some of the hottest moments in any story, wonderfully compelling and interesting characters, and a great plot. Ignore the ADHD spazzes that are just looking for a quick 'bate before bed -- this is best seller material. It had me hooked from start to finish. Absolutely amazing.

You know a story's great when you actually give a shit about the supporting cast. Jammy Jimmy, you've created something amazing. Please write more.

I have been reading all sorts of stories on this site for the bast 5 or 6 years maybe even more, and this is easily the BEST I have ever read. I was actually reading this story from my phone using the literotica app for droid users, and could not put my phone down when i wasn't able to be at my computer. Just an amazing story and there desperately needs to be a sequel if not more. I believe everyone who has read this is looking for more and cannot get enough!

Best story I have found on here. Please please please can we have more.Must find out who Kyle dated to the party in L.A. Also how Katie and Kara got on in NY.

It will be hard to find anything by another author to match the brilance of this thread

A VERY GOOD STORY. I WOULD DEFINATELY

WANT TO READ MORE !!! I

AM REALLY INVOLVED IN THE CHARACTERS.

all that can be said has been, thanks for such a fine story!!!

What an amazing story, hope there's more!

One of the best I have read!!!

Great! I couldn't walk away from this one!

Best story I have read yet on here. Even with 42 pages.

This has got to be the best story I have read on Literotica, and I have read a lot of them! The one, and only problem, is the type-O's. But other then that, 10 stars.

It should be a mini series on HBO. Vary nice work on Conner by the way, being a Scot myself, I liked how you did him...last name was a little weird though, might just be though. :-P

I know authors love good comments - so I'll try to give them to you.

First off... 42 Pages!!! I was in heaven!!! I'd much rather have 1 story at 42 Pages that is a complete story, than 15 chapters of 2 or 3 pages.

Loved the plot... loved the character interaction. Everyone seemed believable. I'm really hoping to read new stories about these characters!!!

My only real issue ( and it wasn't a show stopper - but just an opinion that it could have been done better ) was the 'final' scene with Edwin. Sort of one of those 'saw it coming' and if I were Conner, in the field I was in, knowing what Conner knew... I would have gotten more Edwin more secure, and I would have gone first. Knowing there would be so many possible variables once Edwin was down there, I wouldn't want a kid fresh off training to be the point man at the bottom - better to have him at the top, forcing him down, then on the bottom in a really unknown situation.

But your resolution is well done as well. So I'm not bemoaning 'how could you do that...'.

Also - I didn't really notice any grammatical or spelling issues. Great Job with that. Also a great job of keeping everyone in place. Can't tell you the number of times I've given up on what was otherwise a great story because the author messed up and used the wrong Character name ( as an example if Patricia and Kyle were having a conversation, but half way through it you forgot and started using Katie instead of Patricia ). None of that, and on such a lengthy story... good show!!!

Otherwise - all in all... GET CRACKING ON THE NEXT INSTALLMENT!!!!

Great story and I still wish it had more pages, I used to read books a lot, so this is the closest I have come to reading one in 4-ever

Thanx Great Writing

please

bloody perfect - please hurry up with sequals mate

You deserve a 10 for this story, sory i could only give you a 5

This would have to be the best story i have read on here...again thank you

Looking forward to reading more of your stories

Ken

You put in an amazing amount of work for this story, but it feels incomplete. I would happily read further chapters, and I think that you owe it to yourself and your previous effort to give this story a full ending. It would be absolutely fantastic then.

The amount of detail you put into this was amazing... I really felt like I could see everything you wrote, feel what they felt and so on... Please keep writing!!

this was a hell of a story. Thanks for writing it and please produce more stories

When is the next installation of this story coming out?

Like reading erotica by any one of my favorite novelists! Wonderful story! Thank you for writing it!

This should be published on Kindle....really enjoyed the story.. :.)

that was amazing I could not stop reading thank you

you need to have this made into a movie . I am dead serious you wouldnt be able to make enough copies to sell.

Brosky that was the best thing I have read in a long time. Make the next installment soon.

Ok i really dont like you...

LOVE the story, but it made me only get like an hour or so long sleep last night...

really could not stop reading it.

an awsome story, and the story that is, not the sexual part of it, but the story it self.

not many stories i read here where i really was waiting for the sexual parts to end to continue with the rest :)

thank you, and i will be reading more stuff you write, if it is anything like this.

I'm not that big into reading but once I started reading I couldn't quit. It was like I was watching the movie it was so well written and illustrated. There was just enough sex in it to make it intresting but the story line was just outstanding.

A friend of mine told me to read this and I am totally going to have to thank him. Just the right mix between sex and story and soo well written. loved it!

A GREAT STORY..

EAGERLY WAITING FOR THE SEQUEL/S..

Extremely sexual, sexy, and sensuousm but with a great plot! This could make a great movie series! Bring on some more of it! Well done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Best online story I have read with great attention to detail. I got literally two hours of sleep because it was so awesome. Up there with Dickens. Bring on the sequel.

Sequel would be greatly appreciated, the style of writing you chose for this story was truly captivating....hopefully the sequel is direct of this storyline, kyles a very relatable character

Simply put: THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ ON THIS SITE. Please continue the story with many sequels.

Spicy story line and a dash of thrill coupled with erotica .. Perfect recipe

Get a publisher for yourself

Great story, very sexy, and very promising!

Keep writing! Please!

Fucking awesome! I really hope you keep it going.

I really enjoyed this, it was much more than I expected and well written.

Very nice story. Kinda like a Louie La'mour. Love the riding.

Great story man. I must say its been a long time since i read story like that. You did great job. Andd i appreciate that.but i want you to continue story from right there and go on as long as possible.i like it very much.but i was hoping to read about kyle's and his sisters' trip.and i was hoping there would be some more relation between kyle,kara and katie.

So please please please continue this story.

Its my first request and very humble one. So please consider it.

Thanks

great story you should write a sequel

dude this story is the best i've ever read on this site, you're really good at writing stories (maybe you should consider going pro). Only in fantasy novels and such have i been drawn in and captivated like that. I hope you write a sequel.

I loved this story, and mostly because that is just what it is, a story. The storyline is great [fiction can have liberties on what can or cannot happen] and the sex scenes are believable and hot!

All-in-all, I would have to say it is one of the best, if not THE best stories I've read on this site. Please tell us the next 'novel' is ready to be published and we're just waiting for Literotica to post it.

Please keep writing, you have a great talent for story telling...thanks for sharing it with us.

Anne-on-a-moose

This has got to be one of the best stories i have read. I could not stop till i read the whole thing even though i had to get up early for work the next day lol. You are a very talented writer i would love to see this story continued.

You have ruined 99% of the stories out there by outclassing them all. Your writing is compelling, engaging, and delightful - truly you've raised the bar. The sex is powerful and beautifully written, but the most stunning aspect is this is perhaps the best story I've read in quite a while. Your characters have depth and your plot is sophisticated... A privilege to read and I hope you will continue to delight and enthuse your readers. This is the type of content people would pay money to read. Thank you.

It would be great if the story were finished.

Please write and encourage the author.

really enjoyed the writing. keep up the great work and I can not wait to see what is next.

thanks a lot for a well written and enjoyable yarn. Easily one of the best I've read. The length was wonderful. Kara really turns me on :) I think Pati Cake, Shmi, and Kyle are way overdue for a three way. I also think that could easily happen between the 3 Sibs.

All in all it was well done with no loose ends and quite believable. I have you earmarked to check you for new stories every so often now and if you can find the time I would be more than happy to read them :) Thanks again, Lynn

Thanks so much for a truly wonderful read. It's been awhile since I found something so good it kept me up all night and I spent the next day finishing it. WOW... hope there is a sequel to this gem.

I really love this story. It's sad though cause I think something bad has happened to the author the last post on his blog said he had come down with something and the silence for at lest 6 months.

It was like an erotic novel and it all fitted in perfectly :D great job

This was an amazing novel will there be a followup sequel to this? It's been a while since anything really gripped me and took me along for the ride but this novel did. It''s a really really good read.

I really enjoy your style and thought process. I hope you plan to continue the series. The possibilities seem delicious.

Well done great story :)

I am sure I have read this wonderful story somewhere else but can't remember where.

Doesn't matter as it was well worth reading again and possibly again. Thanks.

Without doubt, this is the most well written story I have read for a long time. Keep going with it!!!!!! Please?

Could not put it down type of story. Excellent

read 4 pages then went to 42 and left this comment

i follow some authers,whose books you cannot put down, just reading another page and another

This story is like that

best i have ever read in Lit

Congrats

Defo best on site, I was up till 4am reading this, not really erotc fiction (although pretty hot in places) just good fiction.

More that a few other writers on here should read this for an idea of how to pen a loveable, yet fucked up, cast

I only gave 5 stars as there was no highter option.

Red

Non stop reading since 7 pm yesterday !

The best story I've read on this site yet! Great character development technique. Very smooth transitions in plot development. Reminds me of the work of Nick Scipio.

I really enjoyed your writing. Great plot with great dialogue. I'm looking forward to your next story posting. Please add me to your "to notify" list.

i could not stop reading this story read it in one sitting great job would give more than 5 stars if i could.

I seriously read this through in about 2 or 3days and it was amazing. I hope to all that is good in this world that there are many more followups and chapters.

Come on man admit it. You have got bigger plans.

to kick out a story, flesh it out (no pun intended) with good characters, a plausible plotline and fill in the lines with some good detail... this story is awesome! it's definitely real novel length, and it's gotta be the beginning of something much, much more... my new all-time-fav... eagerly awaiting the sequel... ;)

Adventure, Awesome Characters, Great Sex

Belongs on the best seller list.

What more could you want!!!

I honestly hope there is more to this one. Just finished and haven not looked yet though. I have been writing for twenty years now and reading avidly for 25 (I'm only 31 lol), and in its genre this story was one of the best. This is an author I will be following up on as should any one else.

I can't believe there isn't more, all I can say is "WONDERFUL." Thank you for a great story.

p.s. More please

This is one of the best stories i've ever read online. Sure, some things could have been improved, but for a story on this site or online in general, it's about perfect! Better than published fiction i've read before!

And I'm really anxious to know what happens to their relationship. How will Patricia deal with him getting it on with his sisters? How will his sisters convince him to get along with them? How do they deal with their relationship and society at the same time? So many questions, aaarrrgghhh! I never do this, but pretty please, write a sequel. It's just that good.

Please. Find your muse and get cracking. One of the best stories I have read on-line, no matter the genre. Well developed so far and you find yourself rooting for the characters. Thank you for taking me away for awhile.

Hope you can continue the series in Part 2. Very well done, enjoyed the story very much. Hope to read another adventure from the Island.

Thanks

DG from Canada

wonderful reading, draws you in to the story, gets you involved in the characters and thier situation. Very well thought out, and even better written. Hate to say it, but it would be a real shame if it ended here. Really hope to see a pt.2.

This is THE single best story on Literotica.com!!! The detail involved is clearly second to none, and is my single favorite. Looking forward to another work by JJ!

You did really great and I am still waiting for more after the end that you've shown there. If you can continue it and you do, please email me @ jumlooc@gmail.com. I really think there's more to the story and I want to know what happens during the trip and the decision of the sisters after the trip and how it goes on from there. I repeat, please do continue the story from where you've ended.

Wonderful

I started a folder in my stories section just for your work. This is worth reading more than once. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to Part 2. Hope it is coming soon.

OUT-FUCKING-STANDING! !!!!!!! What a ride.... Cant wait for the next installments... Have added you to my favorite author list EMAIL ME QUICK!!!!!! When your next chapter is done

very nice writing kept me turning the next page....

I look forward to the next chapters.

Amazing story, spent all night reading it. Is there gonna be a second part, maybe going in to the relationship between Kyle, Kara, and Katie?

Best I've read in some time.

I loved it,wish it would go on and on.

would love to see the story completed,a great read..very nicely done

great story hope you continue it

just spent the last couple days reading this in my spare time. definitely a well done story, with great imagery and plot that really pulled me into it. looking forward to reading any other similar work you put out.

Wow I totally got into this story, very well written and riveting to read and follow. I intend to read everything Jammy Jimmy has written now and I'm sure I will enjoy them all.

The characters were well developed and the plot lines were intriguing. I'd love to see this story go on!