All Comments on 'Three Angels and a Slut'

I really liked how you started this out, and the attention you paid to detail, in the beginning. However, you did seem to rush the story towards the middle and then the ending just seemed so abrupt. I mean maybe it's just me but I was expecting a scene or two with the girls and the main character having sex, but instead it was 'and then bang they were starting their third trimester.

I had to give this a 4 star review .... almost made it a 3 star, but appreciated the sessions with the three girls. However, much more is needed. You did end this too quickly, and left a feeling of incompleteness to the story. How about a follow-up .... picking it up where you ended, but with a look-back to the planting of the seeds with a jump back to 'present' and some future?

A bit on the fantasy side, but enjoyable. At the end it did go much too suddenly out the door....

one of the worst stories i have ever read...no real incest, no character development, completely unrealistic and unexciting...this held about as much excitement for me as a pile of rocks.in conclusion...please do not quit your day job

Mormons don't have multiple wives, please research before you write or else you'll offend and anger people.

I've got some new strange IDEAS....bill

Do hope he can stand the pace of satisfying the three desirous women he has created.

Hardly felt that this was an I.T. yarn but then who cares?

LOL -

Reasonably written and executed and no chance in real life but who cares lol it is a fantasy story -=

wouln't fuck you cos your dick is tiny.

You are a nut case but don't know it!

Please don't try to write, you can't, you are just a pathetic dirty weasle with brain damage and a severe personality disorder, gave you a 1

Think i will read all your stories and give each of them a 1, idiot!

At least the author can spell....Most of the time.

But you should follow-up and tell how Moms life goes and Does he have a lot of Kids. or just 2 from each and have them get back in Shape. How does Mom feel when 1 of her girls Marries her Ex and gets Pregnant and How does she feel when all of her Daughter stay and have Children.

She-it man! I have fantasies" 1st. To watch a lesbian batchelorette party in full 69 two can chew! 2nd is this story to a T !! 3rd is to be the only male alive on the planet

none of the women affected by killed all the males! My job is to make babies the old fashion way "no basting just fucking" FUCK YEAH!

Thanks for sharing this Fantastic story with us!

Love you all! GREG.

OH 100 % OF READING ENJOYMENT BYE.

Loved it

4/5

So now that they have Sister Wives on TV are you still offended or are you ready to retract your comment. 🤨🙄🤭😏🙂😊😆😁😂🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

It is a very good story. Loved it. It does need an chapter, please. AAAAA+++++