by raybishop185
FYI, “fuck me” isn’t foreplay or a lead in to a story, even if it’s a continuation of a previous story.
This story is amazing.
It's amazing how bad it is.
It might have been (hardly) slightly better, if I didn't have to give up trying to figure out who the 'we' in the first paragraph, and pretend that didn't exist before moving on.
Just a hint, when that happens, you suck as a writer.
His wife came home and found what looked like a raisin laying on top of the covers of their bed.