by Skippy47
Although I normally like your stuff, this one really could have done without him having sex with his brother.
Obvious but good - until his brother had sex with him. THAT was just nasty garbage and the story should have been in Gay Male. I mean really - you should understand that.
Lol... a real daydream, but as fiction, it's worth the trip.
The selfish traitor did not expect the return she received. Knowing that her ex-husband had fucked his sister-in-law, mother-in-law, her sister and her "future" husband (his own brother) seems like too much for the bitch's weakened heart.
From the author's mental abysses... what's to come?!?!?!
4 out of 5. It was short, could have been longer, even with more degrees of revenge.
But that's just my opinion.
Short, funny, entertaining, and so well done. Thank you for a nice fun read.
I realise it's supposed to be a fun nonsensical throwaway tale, but this doesn't hit the bar even for that. Plot devices that are both outlandish and unimpressive, and dialog that is so stilted that you can practically see the characters roll their eyes while they make the deliveries. Don't know who he's asking to call 911 at the end there, I thought they were alone.
Sorry, the gay sex took the fun out of the story for me.
I normally love your stories, but this is not one of them.
I liked it because it made me laugh. However, it can't be taken seriously. 4 stars for cheering me up.
Uh, please put an incest tag on a story if there is incest involved (fucking his brother), which is the category this belonged in. It's not a kink I want to read about, which is why I stay out of that category. So thanks for being untrustworthy with your content.
Nah.
I think this is disgusting.
Sorry, Skippy47. I love most of your work,
but this one is just too --
you should have posted this in the appropriate category, not LW.
Now that is an original, at least to me! Thanks Skippy, gave it a 5!
somewhere east of Omaha
I could easily do without the gay sex, but as a whole the story was very good. Foster got revenge in the best way possible -- his ex had a heart attack (?) after learning he was much more man than she gave him credit for!
Thanks buddy! I love these drive-by stories. They always leave someone lying in the gutter
"The only person I know that would mother?" - I think there are some words missing here? There were a few other places with missing, extra, misplaced words.
Funny story. Sadly, it went a bit to far with the BJ. Still, interesting revenge with the mother.
Skippy, Skippy, Skippy, Dude, you have slipped a few of these Bi things into your stories of late, not cool, Dude. LOL. The mom and sister probably would have done it. I still enjoy your sense of humor, you’re quite the wack job, please keep it up.
This was some gay shit..... no straight man is going to get his dick suck by another man🤦🏾🤦🏾. No straight man is going to fuck another man in the ass after that blow job 🤦🏾🤦🏾. This was the most retarded story in a while. It made no sense. The revenge was also retarded. He should've either thank God he found out now instead of waiting until children are involved. Or he could've moved on and lived well. Instead he gets his dick suck and fuck the guy his wife left him for?. I didn't care for this super gay revenge
Too cartoonish for me. Bottom line, the dumb shit married a selfish arrogant guiltless cheating whore. So who's fault is that? She's probably OK looking, has a functioning vagina, and has zero morals, ethics, feelings, or self respect. She'll do just fine. She'll start out doing date prostitution, and end up marrying the dumbest man with the most money; they're a dime a dozen, if she doesn't mind a few physical and character flaws. She can cheat or purchase a boy toy when she gets bored.
As far as the ex husband, she's better off without anyone stupid enough to marry her.
It was kind of fun and cute, I guess. Sorry if I expected too much. Thanks for the effort.
Gave you a 4 but isn't George his brother? Bi or not, he would not just drop and blow his brother as an apology. That part was too far, the rest was fun.
I think there should have been tags to warn so that people that don't want to read of male on male incest could avoid the story.
Despite its brevity, you manage to miss several mistakes and a few examples of overtly incorrect (or perhaps illiterate) word usage. Not that it matters much, this isn't much of a story.
I suppose it was intended to be amusing. The idea that, having massively failed as a husband, he can get revenge by fucking his ex-wife's family is too feeble to contemplate for more than a few seconds
Wimp? I think not. Didn't like brother sucking brother or taking it in the ass
I like the idea of the revenge on the cheating bitch, but incest with the brother is one degree too far.
This is one strange twisted story. What a warped, twisted and funny tale of revenge.
Oh to see her face, lol.
It's nice to have a genuinely funny tale ...
Evah_Rheddy
Loved this story! Short sweet and to the point!! Wow, revenge that hits hard. “Call 911” I laughed like crazy!!! My hats off to the author.
Completely missed the mark on this one, can't think of one good thing about it. Nasty and distasteful on all counts. One thing did occur to me though: those commentors who found this humorous seriously have some mental health problems.
Should have stopped with the mother, the rest was just sick and gratuitous. Brothers having sex isn't revenge, it's incest and the story tags should have warned the reader. 1 star.
Funny! Light hearted story of sweet revenge on his slut wife. LMFAO 5 stars to writer!
This story is loopy in a wonderful. Utterly unbelievable and totally funny. Great job.
Commendation to Skippy for writing a story I equally love and hate. It's repulsive the brothers engaged in gay male sex, but equally funny the wife dumped her husband for her brother-in-law thinking she had the better brother and then finds out her ultimate male is a Nancy.
LOL! Here's hoping God won't punish Skippy for writing this. 😋
Normally like your stories but you completely lost me with the gay incest.
I can't stop LOL this was one of my rare 4 stars
Her mom was boardline acceptable for laughs only. His own brother, no....not even if both were bi. Which apparently was the case sense his brother offered and he accepted.
A bit wacky and over the top but an enjoyable ride despite some problems. Husband is apparently a sex stud for anyone but his wife and having sex with his own brother both felt odd, the former could have probably been explained easily with a line about him not finding her attractive anymore because she turned into a shrew and thus their sex suffered though. 4 stars,
Loved it! The revenge sex instances are very good. The presentation as a live conversation, without monologue, is outstanding. Kudos.
You made me smile tonight. After the three pieces of dreck I tried to read, this lighthearted piece was perfect. Thank you. 5*
@Anonymous Re: "gay tag" - I don't think a single, "off-camera" gay scene requires a gay tag. Certainly anyone using the tags to search for gay stories would likely be disappointed!
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@Anonymous Re: "Too cartoonish" - You call his ex "guiltless?"