All Comments on 'Three Demons Ch. 08'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Ending on a cliffhanger - awww

I'm glad we're about to find out what's going on with Freya - as strange as Erik, Everett, and Oliver are, so is Freya. I'm guessing she's a demon as well, but what are the black shades? Are they part of her struggling to come out? Or are they separate spirits that intend something with her? Looking forward to finding out. In the meantime, enjoying the story.

CupcakeHeartCupcakeHeartover 8 years ago
More!!

I hope the next chapter will be coming out soon. I just die waiting for them!

CalyPyCalyPyover 8 years ago
OMG

This chapter had everything and more. Starting from Oliver being a sweetheart that conquered me, I mean how he woke her up it is just adorable. Then Everett's weird behaviour got me confused. But when she got in his room and the visions... Omg I am still panting. I am glad how it ended, finally there are going to be some secrets revealed. What is behind her and what she really is. Also left me very curious about what she saw on Everett's mirrow, was the future? Or a pass memory? Either way that was hot, primal, intense. Cant wait for next chapter. You did brilliant here!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
So gooooood!

Cliffhangers, ugh!

Please come out with more soon I am so curious to what's going on with Freya and why Everet and Erik are so upset! WHAT HAPPENED ;A;

Also, excelent writing as always, keep up the good work.

Bumblefox907Bumblefox907over 8 years ago
eeep

I can't wait for the next chapter!!

tabbymidnitetabbymidniteover 8 years ago
yout doing a dam fine job

This story is incredibly addictive and erotic. I just cannot get enough. Please get to nine. Love your work, these characters just climb inside the story. Continue speedily....

LovetosmileLovetosmileover 8 years ago
love it!

I really love this story. I can`t wait until the next one.

cantfightfatecantfightfateover 8 years ago
What's starting?!

Write, write, write!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

oh my goodness noooooo

not a cliff hanger

please write more soon

Taterbug7396Taterbug7396over 8 years ago
More please!!!!!

Great story please continue with the plot line........ I loved reading about Freya!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
more more more

Please let there be more soon! I want to know what is going on and who/what she is please write fast!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Plz update!!!!!!

Plz update more frequently, I'm addicted and the story progresses too slowly.. :/

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