by Dash91830
Charles gave in a little bit to early, especially after she called into question his sexuality. Still a good story and well written. Looking forward to the next chapter.
I remember reading a similar story on another account, Is your work influenced by kevinlaroche?
-Dillon Trinh
These characters are straight up monsters and the fact that Eric just folded and forgot about his ex that quickly is straight up fantasy. Or rather, bipolar af. Flipping between emotions that quickly is not normal.
1/5. I'd give this a lower score if I could, but alas, I'll have to settle on a 1.
This got (3) stars...no improvement in the writing, in fact the grammar appears to have worsened...too many issues there.
And, these (3) girls are sociopathic, at best; thinking their status gives them the 'right' to do as they please...almost cost Blair her 'boyfriend'...
Had a girl years ago do something near as despicable to me...stayed friends, kinda sorta, with her...but still, the real feeling was gone because she chose to use words that struck me to the heart!
The old "sticks-and-stones" thing...one of the biggest lies people tell others/kids, whatever, once words are said, they have done the damage-consciously or subconsciously...
The Golden Rule is one of the most important lessons anyone can learn; unfortunately, many choose to ignore this lesson, choosing to instead live by the worldly lessons that mislead...these girls are examples of that...
Gonna check out some of this author's other stories..."we will see"...????