All Comments on 'Three Fathers'

I love your style, adore all of your stories, thanks for writing wet stories for us, Nobody writes wet stories here. Bro-sis & mom-son wet stories will be hot too. Thanks again, love you

@Jess19

The best story ever, I like how you told the story and the way it all flowed together and how she felt about her life and choices along the way. She did end up where she needed to be and happy with how it ended. I don't think there is a stronger or deeper love than a Daddy and daughter.

Sick motherfuckers like you have to bring piss in to the story. No one wants to read that shit in an incest story. Fuck Off - 2 stars

Very well written story. A little upsetting at times but once I started I couldn't put it down. Guess I am not into the dominant submissive stuff but you carried this one off well. Had my interest all the way.

5 stars

Cheers

SAGE

Best story man I was into it great job

I thought this had something for every deviant. I love the incest fan that is outraged by a golden shower gangbang. Well written, good character development.

This was pure trailer park trash, especially with Nick

That was rough - no, it was relentless. While DD/LG is one of my kinks (biological or role play) not into the brutality. I almost gave up but it was Georgia’s commitment to the depravity that made it bearable - and eventually quite hot.

Additionally, the story was excellently structured. The incremental repetition of the intros to each segment were brilliant.

Your attempt at an American narrative voice was fairly convincing, but for your “-our” spellings and relentless use of “proper” as an adverb showed your Limey soul. NO Yank does that, particularly the lower/working class characters here.

You’re not a faint hearted writer, are you?

Wow! Is ANY of this actually true?