All Comments on 'Three Hearts Beating As Two'

Quirky but enjoyable. Good luck with the contest

What a perfect story. I already want a sequel!

Great premise, horrible ending.

Didn't like the ending also its should have been a young man instead of that old one,plus she should have had the babies she wanted...

Apologies if you didn't enjoy the story. It was pretty experimental for me, lessons learned!

Regards,

U_D

I need more this story was so hot!

Excellent writing. How about a sequel with Joe and Quon switching, or perhaps 2 new people testing the next phase with a man swapping with a woman?

I'm old fashioned, not racist by any means but, interracial stories just remind me of all the difficulties the couple will have already had and will continue to have thought their lives. Its all way to hurtful.

Sorry, the best I can give you is 1 star. Life is difficult enough without begging for acceptance from everyone around you.