by PrimalRoots
King of constructive criticism, that first comment. Forget it, this story is great -- but there's just enough character building to warrant a little more explanation, and a little more build up. The sex is great, though!
The title threw me but the story and sex were great. For the love of me, I can't figure out where it's racist. I don't like the word "slut" but it didn't of end me or ruin the story!