by Grey Eagle 286
I liked it but I am a little weird. Keep writing the good stuff. PAPATOAD
I was already a fan of yours. This just bumps your status up a bit higher. The story was great fun and very sexy.
Thanks
So she has a degree from college? You made penny seem retarded and I have noticed in the romance stories I have read from you the main character always does something heroic randomly. Your a good author keep on writing just work on your story a little more. Maybe use an editor.
I was thinking 3 women BUT then you mentioned 3 services and it shifted the focus very well - 3 pennies one for each I do - sorta right but NOT!!
It was a winner alright - #1 met him on the fence - #2 met him after checking the pie - #3 met him with the key and etc. fun times -
Neat idea -
Sounds like a good idea on the surface but wait until the jealousy starts. And can you imagine what happens at the wrong "time of the month"? Run for the hills. I don't think so.
I was thinking it's a really dumb story but it turns out it's tongue in cheek hilarious.