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Click hereIt wasn't long before he was praising me.
"This is so good."
Then later on he said more.
"This is the best one ever!"
It was now decision time. The expression on his face, and the noises that he was making, were telling me that he was getting close to coming. Did he want to empty his balls into my mouth or into my pussy? But before I could ask him, he told me.
"I want you to swallow."
That was always a no from me. What should I do? I couldn't bear to disappoint him, so I'd have to agree to it. I briefly stopped so that I could tell him.
"OK."
He was now smiling from ear to ear.
I finished him off by swiftly bobbing my head. My 'reward' for doing that was to receive his man juice into my mouth. And there was a lot of it. I then swallowed it, even though I really didn't want to.
There's no end to the things that a Mother will do to keep her Son happy!
If Brad was as old as me then we would be calling it a day. But thankfully he wasn't, so he would be able to get it up again in minutes rather than hours. To help that happen he was playing with my nipples. It was exciting me, and when I looked down and I saw his cock sticking up, I knew that it was exciting him as well.
When he said, "It's time," I knew what he meant, and that sent a surge of excitement through my body.
"Bend over the chair."
I looked over at it.
After shaking my head I said, "No, it's too small. It won't be comfortable for me."
"What about the table?"
My big smile told him that it was a yes.
Now that I knew how we were going to do it, I quickly got into position. And he was as eager as I was to start because as soon as I was ready he was behind me, parting my pussy lips with the head of his thick cock.
When he pushed harder, and his cock entered me, I could feel my pussy stretching. That's when I knew that this would be an epic fuck.
I now had all of him inside me. Was this the best cock that I'd ever had? It was too early to say, but it was certainly going to be a contender.
When he started fucking me my pussy instantly went into overdrive. Then he upped the pace and my breathing changed, I was gasping, struggling to breathe. Surprisingly, after less than a minute, I was going to come.
Then he did something to me. I don't know what it was, but it was wonderful, and it finished me off.
I think I screamed out when it was at its peak, but I wasn't sure. But I had cried, and I knew that because my cheeks were wet. But they were tears of joy rather than of pain. It had been wonderful, made special because my Son had given it to me!
When Brad left the room he was wearing a big smile. That was understandable. While he was with me he'd come twice. The first time in my mouth, and I'd swallowed his entire load, and the second one in my sweet pussy when my orgasm was at its highest intensity.
And that's how my Son and I became lovers. There's more to tell, but I'm sorry, it's not for you, because it's time to obey our golden rule.
"What happens at the ABC Massage Parlour, stays there!"
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Tall78701over 1 year agoI realize Alison would not give much of a physical description of herself, as she is the narrator. But a little more physical description of Bianca and Carla might be nice. Did Alison get her money and the house from a favorable divorce settlement? Why did Bianca not receive a life insurance settlement, or had she already run through it? Just a little more information on Carla would have been helpful. When the three women were discussing their new business adventure, was it over coffee or wine? How do the three women know each other as Alison is 48, Bianca is 38, and Carla is 28? A twenty-year spread.
As for their new building, it seems unlikely that they would actually purchase it, as opposed to leasing. I understand the CCTV, but why is “reception” on the second floor? And how did the very first client know to ask for Alison? Had the women done some sort of advertising? There seems to be gaps in the story.
As for grammar and writing style, my biggest issue is not always understanding who is speaking. I realize that many times it is apparent, but sometimes it helps to clarify who is speaking. The pronoun “Son” should not be capitalized unless it is the first word of the sentence or if the speaker is directly addressing her offspring as “Son.” The same rule applies to the word “Mother.” Many of your paragraphs seem to be short and choppy. As a general rule, I would expect most paragraphs to be at least three sentences in length.
You might also improve your writing with the use of synonyms. You used the word “cock” 24 times. You might alternate it with other terms such as dick, penis, rod, pole, stiff shaft, member, etc. The same goes for the word “bottom.” You could use words such as “ass” or “butt” from time to time. And then the word “pussy.” You used it 32 times, and I don’t believe you ever used a single synonym, of which there are hundreds. Way too many to list. My only suggestion is to avoid the word “cunt,” unless it is used in a fit of rage. That really is an unnecessary term in polite language.
The grammar checking software “Grammarly” found 266 errors for “correctness.” That is about one error for every 31 words. Most of these are for comma splices, so I wouldn’t put too much emphasis on those. As the rules for comma usage are somewhat subjective. However, some of the errors seriously need correcting. I would suggest the use of an editor, either a live person or reliable software.
Finally, overall I liked the story. But I just found the incest between Alison and her “young” son (I assume you meant young adult son) a little forced and unnatural. The storyline was not well developed. Maybe it would have made more sense in the trilogy’s first installment to have Alison’s first “non-paying client” be Troy and not Brad. You could always introduce Brad to his mother’s bed later on.
Daddylikessmalltitsover 1 year agoGreat read. I love mom and son stories. The back part of your lifestyle with your friends and the build up is great
You could build from here or start a new one
I’m going to fallow you and read what you have
Look forward to the next trip
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoFantastic, a 'mother and son' love, which takes them to the fullness of sex together - there can be nothing so fullfilling than this for each of them....
chris99999almost 2 years agoAuthorcliffb26
Thanks for your hilarious comment. Your talent as a writer is being wasted, you should do some stories for Literotica. I'm sure that if you do then they all get 5 star ratings!
