All Comments on 'Threesome with Mom and Officer Kemp'

She did this, I did that, we did something, they did something.

It's like a bad sports announcer describing a porn film: nothing about actually getting inside someone's head.

Was there a competition going to see how many times you could use the word vagina in a story?

Golly, I wonder if any of them kissed up another's torso, or kissed their buttocks or licked between their cheeks to suck an anus?

Truth be told, the real anus sucking is in having to slog through a quagmire of repetitive, unoriginal, unimaginative drivel to find an uneventful, unfullfiling ending.

But, I will give you a modicum of credit because you tried(ish)...

Next time try to put part of yourself into the story, find a perspective, develop each person's actions as individual, and for god sakes get a thesaurus!

There was no plot, no character development and no story. If I were a lesbian, reading this would make me straight.

Re-post this under Non-Erotic.

No, wait...

Re-post this in cement and drop it in the ocean!

What was that ?

I " still " think that you did not intend to publish that !

Please do not tell me that you did .... :unamused:

Vagina? Breasts? Anus? Buttocks? I thought I had returned to middle school health class.

What was this I cant even believe that literotica let a story like this be posted I mean seriously what a waste im not even going to get started on the fact that it reminds readers when they were a little kid this must have been written by someone who has never been touched by a female or a guy