All Comments on 'Threeway Pleasure in the Mountains'

I hope you didn't have your heart set on making a living out of writing erotic stories. The basis is good although it's been done many times before. The writing doesn't flow though and doesn't create the image.

.. what has yet to post a story. You have the makings of a good writer. i really enjoyed this. Your wife's uncertainty of your role and her desire to explore made it very real. Also you don't have an '8 inch concrete rod' that some Lit authors mention too often :)

Well done, sir, and I look forward to reading more.