by Kindred_Kravings
This story is certainly long enough. That is the nicest thing I have to say.
GOT SO BORED I COULDN'T FINISH IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'M DONE WITH YOU!
Without doubt this has to be your best (so far). The build up was perfectly attuned to the fabulous climax. Had me hard throughout. Can hardly wait for future installments. This series has put you to the top of erotic writers, in my opinion. KEEP up the great writing.
You're definitely reading the wrong material if you've got issues with 'length'.
; P
The whole chair scene was a little hard for me to visualize, but I did understand the parts that had the carnal sex.
Perhaps it was just me.
It's still a good story, and I'll be watching for the next chapter.
thanks.
No! the story is NOT too long. There has to be at least 50 pages of properly spaced text here. Rule of thumb: 5 pages submitted by the author equals 1 inch in length of the main character's dick. There you go... Throbbie's dick has to be about 10 inches long. Did I say rule of thumb? Geez, I got a big hand! Keep on Throbbin' Kindred... keep on Throbbin'.
Wish it was a few pages longer. I like the longer ones. Thanks.
The story is NOT too long.Give us more pages I say.
Anal is not my thing but I still enjoyed this chapter.I wish his hands would heal soon so he can hold her hips while giving it to her :-)
wow I really like this keep it up, more please. much more
Absolutely amazing mom/son story. I've spent all day today reading it, and I've loved every second. I hope you get to complete this epic story. All the drama made it even more compelling to me, because it showed you worked on the characters, so that all the built up tension helped to enhance the scenes. Congratulations on writing such a fantastic story... Now you only need to keep going one! Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the great work. 5 stars and favourite author, that for sure. ^__^
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Literotica has completely ignored several attempts made by me to cure this issue, and have in fact remained fully non-responsive to my concerns for weeks now. Apparently they could care less whether I have control of my account or not... and I find that especially disconcerting.
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I've read your anonymous comment, and I wonder if you have considered posting your works in StoriesOnline. The site is quite reliable and is well maintained, taking better care of authors, for all I know (alllowing them to have a blog to keep their readers well informed of updates). Both premium and non-premium users would be able to read your works without problems. Besides, authors get more privileges than just readers. I, for me, would love to keep reading your future works and projects wherever you decide to post them, so please, don't stop writing. Your stories are way too good and way too hot! To me, ThRobbie is one great mom-son classic, incidently, my favourite kind of story. If you want to contact me, my email is yamal_lists @ yahoo . com (without the spaces, of course). Again, I would love to hear from you and your future projects. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the amazing work. I hope this comment reaches you somehow, Kindred_Kravings. You rock! ^__^
As in "too much talk and not enough action". Too much angst, too. The first encounters with Mom were delicious, after a while not so good as the talk and thought processes interfered with the action. I know that is the way you wanted it to be, I am not putting your story down, I am just telling you how it seemed to me. Thank you for writing.
While a very good story Chapter 7 grew tedious and wordy, I just skimmed it this time. Again, thank you for writing.
Turned out to be a good series. I would like to kniow what happens 0n the target date.